Hi, this is my first story! Enjoy…
Tris's Pov
My legs are shaking. What Bowl? Do I betray my family or live my life as someone I'm forced to be? My mind screams at me. I cut my hand and close my eyes. I hear the blood sizzle on the coals. Dauntless I think. I walk over and sit down. After a while the Dauntless start running up the stairs. We run onto the grass and I freeze for a moment...the train, we have to jump on. I hear footsteps behind me and I feel a surge of electricity. I start running, my eyes tearing up from the wind. I jump on the train, but I was close to falling. I turn to look out and see an Amity holding their head in their hands. I see a roof approching. An Erudite approches "Out of my way you Shitty Stiff" he snarls. He takes one look at me and his snarl falters for a split second, maybe I was imagining it. His eyes… They're amazing… I see the roof coming closer and gasp as I see a Candor jump. I jump and I'm holding onto the ledge. I look down to see the ground and my head goes numb. The Erudite helps me up "Get up Stiff" he growls slightly
Peter's Pov
I look at the girl. Her eyes, beautiful. Gray,dark, sparkling with mischeif. But she's Abnegation, Abnegation are off limits. I scowl at her "Stiff can't even survive the first day" I said wanting to push her to her limit. I see her face turn red as I walk away and I smirk triumphantly. A trainer steps up and explains how we have to jump. He asks for volenteers and guess what... the Stiff I mean the girl walks forward. I snort as she pulls off her sweater "Yeah Stiff, take it off" I shout. She glares at me and I say "ew, put it back oon" Everyone laughs and for a split second I feel bad. Then I see her jump and I want to jump with her.