My second story! actually, my first, cause i've had this story on paper since 2005. Hope you liked it!

Disclaimer: I dont own any Eragon characters! But i wish to rabbits that i did!

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Chapter 1: Prologue

Deep in the forest of Duweldenvarden, in the Elvin city of Ellesmera, A mother gave birth to a daughter, who she named Kiranna.

She cried as she saw the beautiful face that reminded her so much of her dead mate. She new Kiranna would not be safe growing up in Elvin Politics and In War.She devised a spell to take her beloved daughter to a place far, far away. She held her daughter, and kissed her softly, and said the spell. Kiranna disappeared in a flash of black, and Her mother cried softly to herself, and she disappeared into Tialdari Hall.

Years past, and she never heard from her daughter, so she thought that the spell had killed Kiranna.

Chapter 2: Kiranna Tionne.

Kiranna Tionne was a tall, feminine looking 17 year old, living in the mountainous state of Montana.

She had Raven Black Hair that cascaded down her back, just below her thighs, with unnatural light blondish streaks and Her eyes were a delicate piercing Emerald Green.

She lived on a cattle ranch, that bred pure Quarter Horses, and she herself owned two purebred Arabian's, Eridor and Cystya.

She had gotten them when she was ten, from an Arabian breeder in the Sahara Desert.

Both causted a large amount of money, but Kiranna's father wanted only the best for his daughter.

Kiranna looked nothing like her parents, who had brown hair and brown eyes.

Her father was Six Foot Tall, and her mother 5 foot 6.

She was 6 foot.

Eridor was a Pure Black Stallion with perfect White Star on his forehead, and Cystya was a Pure Grey Mare with an unnatural Black Star on her forehead.

Cystya was the fastest horse in all of the states she had ever gone to for horse shows, and she never tired in running.

Eridor was loyal. Exactly like Cystaya, but more so in love for his mistress.

Kiranna had lived in Montana all her life, but she felt as if she didn't belong there.

One of her favorite things to do was read books. Her favorite was Eragon and Eldest, by Christopher Paolini.

She had just arrived back from high school, and she ran up to her room. That day was Friday, and she was going on a three day horseback ride with her best friend, Sandra Daala, who owned a high spirited Pure Black Arabian Stallion, name Aviance, and A Spirited Friesian Mare, named Odyssey.

She had already packed her backpack that morning, and she had the weirdest things.

Of course, Eragon and Eldest, her CD Player with her country CD's, Hair-Brush, 2 pairs of jeans, a number of T-shirts, and a pair a shorts, Tennis Shoes, Flip-Flops, Socks. Her other bag, had an assortment of her favorite foods.

Technically, it wasn't food. She had packed Five Two Liter Bottles, Sierra Mist, Mountain Dew, Root Beer, Dr.Pepper, and Pepsi.

Three packages of Bubble Gum, Three packages of Tick-Tacks, and a bag of Nerds.

She grabbed her Hat, and ran down stairs, and grabbed her sleeping bag. Her mother smiled at her.

" Be careful heading over to Sandra's, Kiranna. No galloping in the forest. Your Father and I will be waiting for you to call when you get there."

Kiranna laughed, and kissed her mother on the cheek.

"I promise I'll be safe. Tell Dad that I love him," She laughed.

She grabbed a bag of carrots, and sprinted to the barn.

Kiranna opened the barn door, and was greeted by friendly nickers. She brought out Cystya and Eridor's tack, and brought them both out and started grooming them till they shined.

She packed all of there grooming supplies, including their halters wich matched their colors.

As she tacked them up, she had a weird feeling, as if something was calling her?

Oh well. She thought

She strapped her bags to Cystya, and took out her 4 ½ foot wooden sword, wich her brother had carved for her 15th birthday.

It was wood, but she wouldn't leave it behind.

Her and Sandra both had swords, and practiced repeatedly, since they both were nuts about The Inheritance Trilogy.

She swung onto Eridor, and they rode off in the direction of Sandra's Ranch.

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ok, please tell me if i did ok. it was probably really wierd, but i had to explain alot of things.

Please review! My life depends apon it!