A/n i do not own naruto

ahh the sequel

Jiraya, naruto, and Hinata set up camp in the outskirts of sand. " now naruto watch closely." he then should him the first stage of Rasengan. "Like this." he then popped the balloon. "Um yes now this is for power."he then popped a rubber ball. "So all I have too do is add power..." in two seconds he popped the rubber ball. "Hm I see," said naruto. "this techniqe is hard unless you have a lot of chakra and controll. something I already have. thats why its easy." he analysed. "wow it took me four months too figure that out." jiraya mumbled. "well the last test is too see if I can contain it. right?" asked naruto. "Ya your right your smart kid."

said jiraya happy his student isnt a idiot but still not a dick.

"Well here's the next part." he then showed him the thired stage. And naruto popped it. "Ha ha! not so mighty now are ya?" asked jiraya in a mocking tone. "How long did it take you too get this far?" asked naruto. "umm thats not important." said jiraya too quickly. "Well I got some research too do." he then left. five minutes later "alright come on out. I know your there." as soon as he finished four people came out of hiding.

"Hmm we're here too eliminate you boy." said a boy with a head sticking out of his back."ya so give up and let us kill you." said a fat guy. "hmm." said naruto. all of a sudden two of the sound four were shreded to pieces while the other three were cut in half. "You fools," began naruto. "I fused with my swords so now my right arm can cut threw almost anything and my left arm can absorb chakra and shave almost any thing." he then let them die. "I see I better be carful not too go near your arms." said a new commer. "who the hell are you?" demanded naruto.

"My name is Kimmimarow." kimmimarowanswered. "oh well what do you want?" asked hinata. "I was sent to kill you Naruto Uzumaki." stated Kimmimarow. "err damn it!" yelled naruto. he then did several seals. rat, tiger, dog, ox, rabbit, then tiger. "Fire style: pheonix fire jutsu!" as soon as he finished he shot fifty mini fire ball's at kimmimarow. he dodged twenty of them, hit ten of them with his bone blade then

got hit with the last twenty of them. as soon as he hit the ground naruto activated the sharingan and threw ninja wire sticking Kimmimarow too a tree. snake, dragon, rabbit, then tiger. "fire style: fire dragon missle!"

The attack was a huge fire like missle burning most of Kimmimarow's skin away showing much of his bone's. "No one could of survived that!" said hinata out of astonishment. "it's not over yet." said naruto. "I addmite i stole this last attack." before hinata could ask he did two hand sign's. rabbit, tiger. "Fire style: fire coffin jutsu!" the fire than compressed making anything inside feel like he/she got hit with a Atomic missle.

"Amazing Naruto-kun!" said hinata awed once again. there laid Kimmimarow's body. then all of a sudden it moved. it started turning into a purple dinosaur like thing. "Is that barney?" asked Naruto. "Um I really dont know." said hinata confused as he was. "I asure you I am not barney." said the barney imposter. "Umm right." replied naruto. "Now too finish you." said Kimmimaro as he charged too strike. Naruto was able too

dodge but hinata was not so lucky. she got hit right next too the heart. "HINATA-HIME!" yelled naruto as he caught a falling Hinata. "Err I'll kill you!" he then felt a burning in his eye's with it the knoledge of the Mangekyou sharingan. "DIE! MANGEKYOU! AMATERASU!" At that instant Kimmimarow was being incinerated by a dark flame. Thankfully the side effects such as going blind did not affect naruto because of the nine tailed fox. "Hinata-hime, I'm sorr..." he then heared her breathing slightly. "Hinata hold on. Mystical palm advanced jutsu!" he then healed her wound but she still lost alot of blood. "I got too get her to the hospital."

he then went to the closest hospital in sand.

He was sitting by hinata's bed when the door opened. "are you okay?" asked a familier voice. "Gaara? what are you doing here?" he asked suspiciously. "Relax. I've seen the error's in my way's and I'm glad I did." Gaara said. "That's good." he then remembered something jiraya tought him once. "Hey gaara I can fix the seal of the shukaku for you." said Naruto. "really can you do that right now?" he asked hopefully. "yes hold still. five prong seal!" as he hit gaara, gaara went flying. "Thank you." "get some rest the shukaku wont bother you again." Gaara then went too sleep.

wow first chapter well review.