(Hey guys Ssj Goku here, after about a month since my last update of any story I have been under a lot of stress trying to think of the perfect Dbz story that has, Action, Violence, Humour and Adventure in it….it took me until 3 days ago to think of an idea so I think this might be the long awaited Dbz story of the centaury… for Kami's sake I sure hope it is….but first)

Disclaimer: I do not own Dragonball Z or any songs I may use as battle music…. Ok I do own Baston, Cloud, Clause, Claude, Baron, Barasane, Krow, Krysler, Aqualis and Sirus, Vegeta's Female clone owns Gebbeca, Akro, Peah, Apaceo, Chinips, Chinzu, Maya, Faulicrew, Nefnel and Noroc

Bk: phew….!! Long Disclaimer…

Goku: well maybe you and VFC shouldn't have made so much characters!!

Bk: yeah maybe we did over do I…. HEY!! Anyway on to the best Dbz story EVER!!... I hope… now for the narration

(Over ten thousand years ago…before the evil Tyrant Majin Buu existed, a terrible demon destroyed the cosmetic galaxy... killing over 1 hundred billion people/ Aliens, this unrelentless warrior was created to destroy everything in the universe till he was the most powerful being in existence, but 4,500 years later a warrior challenged the demon to a battle of power and strength, the warrior was a saiyan, and single handedly defeated the demon… so he thinks!!)

(To the time that Goku is around the demon crash landed on earth… knowing of planet Vegeta's Destruction to Frieza the Demon set out to find the race that nearly wiped him out…. This is the story of the chaotic demon… Eclipse!!)

ECLIPSE THE CHAOTIC DEMON

On the blue sphere known as earth a single saiyan warrior walks through the dark forest, one that where no one has ever come out of… but this saiyan had no fear... In fact he hardly had any emotions at all... His name is Aqualis and he is one of the main roles in this story.

Now at a small house in the 435 east district area, another saiyan starts to stuff his face with tons of food made by his wife… unaware of the danger that is soon to follow…

"Mmph…thiph is really Goodph!!" Goku the saviour of earth shouted with his mouth full of food… as he then continued to stuff his face.

Just then the doorbell rung… knowing Goku was too busy eating, his wife Chi-chi answered the door, and it was none other than the prince of saiyans Vegeta

"Oh hello Vegeta how are you?" Chi-chi asked as she let Vegeta inside and shut the door

"I'm fine… I guess" Vegeta replied not expecting to get a question like that today, Vegeta then sat down next to Goku who had just finished eating and was now rubbing his stomach

"That was so good I can't wait for dinner!!" Goku shouted happily as he noticed Vegeta in the corner of his eye, "Oh hey Vegeta…what's up?" he asked

"Not a lot Kakarot…" Vegeta replied as he noticed all the plates of food scraps and nearly puked, "I have been sensing some weird powers around lately Kakarot…evil powers, ones like I have never felt before"

"Oh good then It isn't just me!" Goku replied logically, as he got all serious, "I have been sensing it too… whatever we're up against Vegeta…. This won't be an easy victory"

Meanwhile at a rocky plain another saiyan warrior was busy training when he sensed the horrible energy that was steadily rising... "Oh man this is terrible… what power it's like none I have ever sensed before" he said to himself as he started to sweat from the thought of who it could be the saiyan was Sirus a newer member to the Z- warriors and one of the only who hasn't become a super saiyan

"Maybe I should go see Goku and Vegeta they might know who we're up against..." Sirus thought to himself as he flew off towards Goku's

The terror was about to start... at East city a smoking crater was seen eastward about 200km from the city itself... it was a small spaceship and inside was the terrible being of immaculate power... the pod door opened and from it revealed a demon like figure that had Crimson red hair, Blazing Purple eyes and a slighter light purple skin... this was the beginning of the end of earth...

"Hmmm this planet has human civilisation on it..." The Demon thought to himself as an evil grin spread across his face... he then raised hand and in an instant East was gone in a huge ball of purple energy the Demon began to laugh maniacally as he flew off to create more havoc

To be continued

Please R&R... and don't be too mean about it...if it needs work just send a message and I'll take your idea and make it happen!