MysticalDreamer: Hi! This is my first cowboy bebop fic...actually its a
poem. Its from Faye's point of view. Let me know what you guys and girls
think, k?
PS: I don't own Cowboy Bebop.
That Lunkhead
~by Faye Valentine
Lunkhead
Its the only word to describe him-
That Lunkhead
He comes
He goes
I don't know anymore
Oh hell
What is it about-
That Lunkhead
He leaves me hanging
Not knowing
I came back-not to stay
But I did
Was it for him?
Perhaps, perhaps not
I'll never know now
He's leaving
Leaving
To go off and die
I should have told him the truth
Instead of shooting my damn gun
In the air, above his head
Instead of breaking down and crying
I should've said-something-to, to-
That Lunkhead
And now
Now its too late
To tell the Lunkhead how I really feel
Or felt
If he's dead, then I should lose these feelings
But for some reason
I can't
And I don't think I ever will
I'll never forget
Maybe thats just part of his charm
That Lunkhead
MD: ok ok i know, it doesn't ryhme, but does it suck? is it good? just let me know what you think...but no flames...no!!! EVIL FLAMES!! hey that sounds cool~EvilFlame. great idea for a s/n..and dont nobody take it...or else....NOW OFF YOU GO TO REVIEW!!! Please?? with sugarlumps and anything else you want on top??
PS: I don't own Cowboy Bebop.
That Lunkhead
~by Faye Valentine
Lunkhead
Its the only word to describe him-
That Lunkhead
He comes
He goes
I don't know anymore
Oh hell
What is it about-
That Lunkhead
He leaves me hanging
Not knowing
I came back-not to stay
But I did
Was it for him?
Perhaps, perhaps not
I'll never know now
He's leaving
Leaving
To go off and die
I should have told him the truth
Instead of shooting my damn gun
In the air, above his head
Instead of breaking down and crying
I should've said-something-to, to-
That Lunkhead
And now
Now its too late
To tell the Lunkhead how I really feel
Or felt
If he's dead, then I should lose these feelings
But for some reason
I can't
And I don't think I ever will
I'll never forget
Maybe thats just part of his charm
That Lunkhead
MD: ok ok i know, it doesn't ryhme, but does it suck? is it good? just let me know what you think...but no flames...no!!! EVIL FLAMES!! hey that sounds cool~EvilFlame. great idea for a s/n..and dont nobody take it...or else....NOW OFF YOU GO TO REVIEW!!! Please?? with sugarlumps and anything else you want on top??
