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Vallejo's Death

ACT 1

"FILLMORE" "Yeah Ingrid" he said to the walkie-talkie in a deep voice. "You better come to HQ quick". "I'm on it, over out". A few minutes later Fillmore arrives to HQ and Ingrid comes up to him and says "there's been a murder the only evidence we have is Vallejo. "What about Vallejo" Fillmore asked. "He's dead and all we found was a note on his desk it is kind of weird some of the words are capitalized for no reason what so ever. Let me take a look at the note.

dear safety patrol my life is now Gone Off To a better place up and Obove i have Left you guys behind i lOve you all fillmore you can be head Chief because you could do anything liKe cakE i may Rest in peace. And remember my favorite # is 7

truly yours

vallejo

"Hey Ingrid there is something wrong about this letter look circle all the capitalized letters it comes up to be GOTOLOCKER". "And why did he put his favorite number in the letter I just don't get it Vallejo was just saying how good life was and now they say he took his own life that's not possible".

"Hey Fillmore let me see the letter" said O'Farrell. "FILLMORE" O'Farrell yelled excitedly "if you put spaces in between the letters and put number seven in the group of letters a message appears saying GO TO LOCKER 7". "Dog your right why didn't I see that" Fillmore said. "Let's go Ingrid" said Fillmore. O'Farrell asked if he could come but Ingrid said he should stay put and look for prints on the letter.

As Fillmore and Ingrid got to the locker a janitor was cleaning it out and Fillmore asked if they could look inside the locker and also take a look at the trash bin. They found nothing but white makeup. "What does this mean Ingrid" asked Fillmore? "I don't know but I'm going to go to the local makeup shop and ask for some names of who bought makeup in the last few days" said Ingrid. "All right then I will met you at HQ when you are done" said Fillmore.

"Hey O'Farrell did you find any prints on the letter yea but I gave to Tehama to run a match for who's they were". "FILLMORE" yelled principle Folsom I want you to find out who killed Vallejo now or your off the force"! "Well do you have any leads" said Folsom in a demanding voice. "No we don't have a lead but we have evidence". "I don't care about evidence, just find out who killed Vallejo and report back to me".

As Ingrid walked in she asked "what was all that about"? Fillmore said nothing. "Hey Tehama did any prints match up to the prints on the letter"? "Yea there's a match"… "Well who's our guy Fillmore and Ingrid asked. " Mindle." "Who's Mindle?" "The mime that tried to steal the book at the book store at Vamperitas book convention" said Tehama. "Oh and Ingrid did you get any names at the store" asked Fillmore. "No but the store clerk said some weird looking kid with an X Middle School Safety Patrol Badge with red hair came in and asked for custom pair of underpants"! "Then everyone looked at O'Farrell and he just sat there and said "what I can't tell the difference between my moms and mine one day I wore my moms and I was scared till I was in 9th grade." "But O'Farrell you are only in 8th grade". "I know it is scary isn't it".

To be continued Act 2&3 if you like so please review!