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Tori- if i'm REALLY good will santa give me a Twilight?

Alice- NO

Tori- Please???

Alice- I SAID NO

Tori- DANG!

Will It Go Too Far?

A story by Tori- a Tori Story!

"Nessie! Come on!" yelled Alice from down stairs.

"I'm almost ready!" I yelled back as I was frantically trying to straighten my hair. "Goodness. You think that me laying out her outfit would be enough to have her ready on time!" I heard Alice say downstairs. I grabbed my purse on the way out of my room and flew down the stairs, to meet Alice at the bottom inspecting my hair and eye-makeup.

"You look great, but if you ever want to hit all these stores in one day, you had better hurry up." I rolled my eyes and went past her to Mom and Dad, sitting in the kitchen.

"Alright, well I'm off to the mall. I'll be back some time tonight."

My Dad looked over my outfit of a teal mini skirt, black knee-high heeled leather boots, a low-cut white tank top, with a teal rock necklace. "No daughter of mine is going out like that!" he scoffed, putting his newspaper down on the table, and giving me that a that said 'get out of that outfit right now'.

"Dad! Its perfectly fine! Aunt Alice picked it out!

"Renesme Cullen, you will go change right now. Do you understand me?" He said, raising his voice, and arching his eyebrow. "And Alice?" he said turning his head to her.

"What?" she said in her most preppy 'your not in charge of me' voice "She's fifteen! Get over it, Daddy. Clothes are a necessity and an art, so don't insult it." I stood behind Alice with my hands on my hips, and a big triumphant smile on my face.

"Fine! Your not going." Dad said simply.

"What that is so not fair! I cant believe this! Dad! I mean" I whined.

"That's my final word, now up to your room." He said raising his voice and standing up. He always looked scary when he made that look, and got all defensive, but he didn't scare me.

"Fine!" I said as I turned on my heel and started to walk out of the room I muttered "Fuck him. Strict as…"

"RENESME CULLEN!" I heard my dad shout from behind me. Shit! I forgot about the whole can hear all, and read minds. Why did he have to be like this. He grabbed me by the arm and spun me around. I tried to pull back from his grasp but it was useless. "What did you just say?!?!?!" he asked, his face an inch from mine.

"I didn't say anything!" I defended, now choking back tears. "Stoppit! Let me go!" I screamed at him.

"Don't raise your voice at me!" he said, through his voice, grip tightening.

"I'll do whatever the fuck I please!" I spit back at him, not realizing the ferocity of what I had just said.

"Damn it! You disrespectful child!" but then his arms were gone, and Mom, Bella, was holding him back. "Your grounded for a week!" he yelled, furious. No phone, internet, T.V., parties, and you will be in bed by 9:00pm!"

"What the fuck!" I screamed at him, only making him fight against my mom harder. "Mom?!"

"Honey, listen to your father. That was very disrespectful. Now go upstairs." She said all of this calmingly and dismissively, so I knew there was no point in trying to fight her. "And Alice, shopping trip over."

"Okay." She said, trying to cheer me up "Come on Ness, lets go upstairs, I NEED to redo your toenails, desperately."

"Fine." I said, talking her arm and going up the stairs "What a fuckoff." I mumbled to her.

Then I heard a deep growl from downstairs "Two Weeks!" I heard Daddy yell. I ran the rest of the way to my room, and slammed the door, but Alice was already sitting on the bed.

"C'mere." She said, patting the bed beside her. I sat down and she put her arm around me "I know I mouthed him off and all, but YOU cant! I know he's being harsh on you, but it's cause he loves you."

"Yeah, I can sure tell."

"He does!"

"Yeah, that's a load of shit, If I ever heard it!"

"Ness! Watch your language! You know your dad can hear you."

"I really don't give a fuck, in fact…" I imagined Jake kissing me, then pushing me on the bed, ripping my clothes off me… I heard a growl from down stairs, and a piece of furniture break.

"What did you show him?" Alice asked.

"Jake ripping my clothes off me!" we both burst into hysterics.

"Oh! You, *snort, had better, *snort, stop! He's gonna make it three!!! HAHAHAHA!" Alice just couldn't stop laughing, viewing the things Edward was thinking about doing in the future.

"OH! Hahaha! Hey. Hey. Hey. Okay Auntie, we seriously need to find something for me to wear for school! I mean, I cant shop over the internet, so what do I do?"

"Please, as if I cant pick every thing out!"

"Alice…..."

"I can do it!" I gave her a worried glance "Trust me, now go do your summer reading, Aunt Alice has got this." And with that she was gone, and I had Little Women in my lap. 'Well atleast I have time to sleep in.' I thought, threw the book on the floor, and laid back.

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