Anyway, this story idea came to me at school.
I must tell you now that the character I'm intrducing is the main character in a manga I'm creating, I thought she fit this role perfectly. So you guys get to see a sneak peak of a manga that might be released! Enjoy!
Long Summary- Naruto has deffeated Pain and the village is completely redone. Everything is perfect and how it should be, but on a mission, Naruto, Sakura, Lee and Kakashi, come across teenage girl screaming for help. When the girl takes them to her friend who has been badly injered. Naruto and the team deside to take her back to the village, but who is this girl?
And is she connected to Naruto somehow?
Disclaimer- ovesly I dont own Naruto.
Tsuki-Long Lost Sister Chapter 1: Girls in the Woods Naruto POV
Me, Lee, Sakura and Kakashi jumped through the trees of the Land of Fire's forest. We had just got done doing a mission in a small town that was having a problem with a deadly gang, we took them down easily, one guy actully surendered when he reconised me, the Kyuubi's Juncuriki. Lady Tsunade really should get that I'm not some weakling! I deffeated Pain for christs sake! She was driving me nuts, saying little missions are all I can handle right now. Right. Sure I'm still alittle tired from the battle, but I'm no baby.
"Naruto?" someones voice broke my consentration, I nearly hit my head on a tree branch. Then I realised that it was Bushy Bows was the one who spoke.
"What is it, Bushy Bows?" I asked inoied.
"Somethings bothering you. I can tell, its in your eyes."
I sighed, "Naw, I'm good." I smilied and gave him a thumbs up.
He smiled and nodded and turned his head back to the trees.
I looked at the quickly passing trees, remembering the battle with Pain. I remembered my converstion with the 4th Hokage, who turnd out to be my father. I smiled, remebering his words.
"HELP! Someone please help!" a voice yelled.
"Kakashi?" I asked, wondering if we should help.
Kakashi seemed to have heard as well but he was susoipuse, "It could be a trap."
"Please, someone!" the voice pleaded.
I grouned and jumped to the ground and ran in the dirction of the voice. I heard the others behind me.
"Naruto!" Sakura yelled at me.
I gulped but kept running. I suddenly burst into a clearing filled with white flowers. Two people, one keeling on the ground with their back to me, the other was lying on the ground. I could tell from where I stood that the two people were girls, the one kneeling looked fine,but the one on the ground seemed unconcious, and had a deep head wound.
I ran the the girls, "Whats going on?" I asked standing over them.
The girl kneeling looked up at me, her hair was a deep brown and her eyes were, too, tears feel from her eyes and you could tell she was scared. She only seemed to be 16 or 18.
"Oh thank god!" she jumped up and hugged me. I stood surprised for a minute gwaking. She let go of me and stared deep in my eyes.
"You must help me! My friend is badly hurt. I tried to heal her but I'm out of chakara. Please help." she pleaded.
I stared at the unconcious girl. Her hair was hair was surprisingly almost my shade of blonde. She was covered head to toe in wounds and cuts, in some places the skin was completely gone, "Yeah I can see that."
"But will y-"
"NARUTO!"
The girl was cut off my a loud voice, one I'd know anywhere. Sakura.
I turned to see her storming in to the clearing, her fist was clenched and ready. I backed up with my hands in front of me.
"W-wait Sakura! Its n-not what you think!"
To late. Sakura charged right me and her fist struck me in the cheek sending me to fly backwards a few feet away. I sat on my bum rubbing my cheek. I looked up to see her coming for me agian.
I put my hands up and looked away. But nothing hit me. I looked up surprised to see the girl crying earlyer was in front of me arms outstrched, protecting me.
"Stop! Dont hurt him!" she yelled at Sakura. Sakura stood dumbfounded at the girl, but put her fist down.
"Were you the one yelling?" Sakura asked.
The girl put her arms down and nodded, "Yes. Me and my friend were in a fight and my friend got badly hurt. I'd heal her myself, but I'm completely out of chakara." the girl swayed alittle.
"I see that. Wait! Your a medical ninja?" Sakura asked surprised.
The girl nodded, "Please help me."
"She is a fairly bad state, Sakura. But I dont't think its anything you can't handle." Lee said examining the girl.
Sakura walked to the uncousous girl and examined her. The girl, inspit her weak state, ran over to the girl. I fallowed rubbing my cheek.
Kakashi came in and stood over us and looked the girl up and down, "Who exactly did you run in to?"
The girl shook her head, "I dont know. Two men in black clouks with red clouds on them."
All of us froze, we knew who they were.
"The Akatsuki." I spat the word.
"Akatsuki?" the girl asked. She looked at me confused.
"They are a orginision, who's only goal is to collect jinuriki, hosts of tailed beasts." Kakashi explined.
Shock crossed her face and she gulped loudly.
"Its unordinary for them to attack anyone who isn't a jinuriki." Kakashi said sounding suspicus.
The girl seemed to be sweating hard. Her eyes were as wide as tennis balls. If this girl tells lies, shes not very good at it.
Kakashi just stared at the girl and she just got more and more nurvous.
I looked down at the girl Sakura was healing, all her wounds were healed but the missing skin was still slowly coming back. I looked up at Sakura, she seemed deep in consentration she also seemed to be struggling.
"Hey. Sakura. You ok?" I asked. Everyone took their eyes off the girl to look at Sakura. I heard the girl sigh softly next to me.
Sakura grunted alittle, "Yeah. I havent healed anything like this sense the time you fought Orchimaru." Sakura said looking at me.
I sighed and looked at the ground remembering when Captine Umuto told me it was me who hurt Sakura while I was in the nine tails state. But why would this girl have similer wounds as me?
The girl's breath speed up alittle and I felt her eyes on me.
"Ugh..." a light voice groaned.
We all gasped and looked at the girl on the ground. Sakura was still trying to heal the last bit of missing skin that covered her face. Her eyes opened slightly, but just enough that I could tell that her eyes were a bright blue. Her head flopped to the side facing the girl next to me.
"S-shizu? A-are they gone?" she asked softly.
The girl who's name was Shizu nodded and smiled in relife, a tear slid down her cheek, "yes they're gone."
The girl smiled slightly, "I kicked butt, huh?" she asked.
"Yeah. You kicked ass." Shizu said. I was surrprised to hear the girl swear.
The girl laughed. Then sighed and fainted. Sakura sighed to and seemed to fall forward alittle. Lee caught her.
"Whoa. Sakura, are you ok?" he asked.
"Yeah just exausted." she reasured him. He nodded and let her go.
Shizu looked at Sakura, "Will she be ok?"
Sakura plased her hand on her head and nodded, "Yeah," she smiled, "she's just tired. She should wake up tommaro."
Shizu sighed.
"I say you and the girl come to the village and rest up for the night. I doubt you want to sleep out here." Kakashi said.
"Yes please. I'd love that."
Kakashi nodded started for the trees. Sakura started picking up the girl but slipped.
I caught her this time, "Sakura, let me carry her. You've done enough." I said trying to be polite.
"Back off, Naruto, I can carry her." And with that she through the girl on her back and jumped in the trees after Kakashi, Lee fallowed after her.
"Is that girl always so pissy?" Shizu asked.
I laughed alittle, "You have no idea." I looked at her, "Can you run, or would you like me to carry you?" I wanted to be polite.
She shook her head, "I may look tired, but I'm not weak. Just lead the way and I'll fallow." she said.
I smiled, "Alright just fallow me." I gave her a thumbs up, and jumped into the trees.
She laughed. "Your just like her." I think I heared her say. But I shrugged and continued going.
So this is it. Its not that good but it'll get way better! I love to hear your comments, good and bad! lol! yes my spelling an't good nither is my grammer, but I'm useing spell check so some might not get checked right or what ever.
the next chapter should be up today or tommaro.