This is not a twilight book, it's a book about a vampire. I was hoping that you would like it and give me some reviews, as I plan to publish this book someday. I would really appreciate it, if you would tell me what you think. I don't know how long it will take me to write it, but i've already started on chapter 2. Thank you. xx
Human Killer
Chapter 1
A shadow loomed out the the dark forest. The trees silent in the night, with no breeze present. The full moon hidden behind onimous clouds. Black eyes staring ahead, seeing what no mere human can see, and hearing what no mere human can hear. The sight and sound of humans having a wild, out of control party. Their drunk the creature thinks, as she stares ahead at the twenty human campers.
The moon momentairly comes out from behind the clouds and iluminates the patch of forest the creature stalkes. The creature is a stunning female with long, dark brown, wavy hair down the centre of her back. Standing at five foot four inches and weighing eight stone. She's wearing a black leather corset and black leather shorts. Wearing nothing on her feet but bear skin.
But her beauty is the trap any human would fall prey to. When they come close they will feel fear, but they don't understand why. She will watch them with amusement as they fight their inner emotional turmoil. She will continue to watch them as they finally look upon her face and see her dangerous black eyes. She loves this bit the most. Because when they freeze, she will smile, showing pearly white teeth and two long white fangs.
Then the chase will begin. As she is a creature of the night, the chase is what she loves the most. She's always had a facination and a thrill with chasing her prey, before she goes in for the kill. She loves to play with her food before she eats it.
Humans are discusting she thinks as she continues to watch them. Some of them are dancing in their underwear around a camp fire, whereas some of them have gone into their tent for an early night or to have sexual intercouse she cannot tell. She sniffs the air and closes her eyes in ectasy at the smell. Teenagers she thinks, the tastiest. She opens her eyes and smirks. They won't know what hit them she thinks as she stalkes closer to them.
She is silent as she stalkes. Black eyes glinting maliciously, with a full grown smirk on her face, showing her pointed fangs. Saliva starts to gather in her mouth as she growls. She moves closer and closer to the humans making no noise as she steps over leaves, twigs and stones.
One of the humans is leaving as he had explained he needed the toilet. Now's my chance she thinks. As he is now hidden from view of his friends, the creature runs and climbs a tall tree, making no sound. She is above him as he drops his pants. Nothing about this human is enticing to her but his blood.
He is shorter than most males, at only five foot five. He is very skinny with no muscles, and his hair is dirty and unwashed. What any female would want with him i'll never know she thinks. The man is taking a piss now with his eyes closed tight as he enjoyes the feeling. Then out of the tree the creature jumps. She likes to play games but this one has to be quick, as she doesn't what to alert the other humans.
She lands behind him. and with a strike of a snake, pierces her teeth through the soft skin of his jugular. He tastes so sweet she thinks, as the blood leaves his body and enters hers. His mouth is open in a silent scream. When the last drop of his blood is her's, she drops his corpse, as it is nothing to her now. One drop of blood drips done her chin. She put her finger to her chin and wipes the blood, and puts it in her mouth. I don't want to waste any she thinks. She lookes upon the other humans as they enjoy themselves, not knowing that their joyful night is going to become a nightmare. Nineteen more to go she thinks as she stalkes forward for her next prey.