Alright this idea popped into my mind and sounded pretty good. Give it a try and tell mw what you think.
To all the readers of my other fanfictions: I will be updateing soon. School has been nuts and i already have half the next chapter done for them.
Sorry about any grammer mistakes just seeing if this story will take off or if it's a dud.
EPOV
I stood there watching. Stunned. I could not believe what my eyes were seeing. In my 90 years of existence, I had never seen what I was seeing now.
Bella had gone to her mother's house in Florida for a week, a type of vacation. She was unwilling to go by herself but with some gentle convincing, I was able to get her on the plane. She called the day before she was to return to Forks and said she was going to spend another week with Renee. I thought nothing of it. She wanted to spend time with her mother, nothing wrong with that. But when she called again and said she was staying for another 5 days, I got worried and flew down to Florida alone.
So now here I sit. In a palm tree along the beach watching her.
Bella sat there on the beach in Sarasota, Florida, the sun peeking out only inches from the water as it continued to fall bringing in the ever-familiar night. She sat cross-legged and side ways so I could see her form from the side instead of the back. She wore casual Florida attire; black shorts, sandals, and a white tank top. She looked quite confused. The sight of her caused my breath to hitch in my throat, a feeling I was becoming accustomed to over the time we've been together.
She was staring over at the silhouette of a person, a boy to be specific.
What sounded like a growl, from what I could hear from the position I was in 40 feet behind them, whispered through the still, seemingly unmoving, air.
"What's wrong Zeke? What's the matter?" she said leaning in towards him.
'Zeke' leaned over towards her face, eyes closed.
Bella stayed were she was as if knowing what he was about to do. I on the other hand was not as ready for what he did.
He closed the distance between their faces, his lips lightly grazing from her chin to the side of her mouth.
A low growl tore from my chest. He wasn't kissing her but still I was unsure about what he was doing.
He ran his cheek along hers then his mouth went back to the corner of her mouth. This time however he nipped her with his teeth. Not enough to break skin but enough that she felt it. He then began to lick at the spot were he had nipped seconds before.
My angel sat there and started laughing. Like none of this bothered her.
Now I was completely lost. Why was this boy acting like a puppy wanting food from its mother? And why was Bella letting him do it?
Then I noticed something that finally answered my first question.
The boy opened his eyes. I was stunned beyond belief at the scene now laid before me.
His eyes were a dark metallic burgundy.
He was a newborn.
And that meant that he wasn't nipping at her face in affection. It meant he was hungry.
And worse then that, I couldn't read his mind.
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