1st fanfic. Please Review!


In the end, it took over twenty-five years for the dust storms and acid rainfall to stop. During those years, few people were permitted onto the Axiom. Their home, supposedly called Chicago, according to an old map, was soon a place buzzing with robots, people, animals once held in stasis aboard the Axiom, and plants whose genetic makeup was stored in the Axiom main computer. All bots helped raise the destroyed city. All but a few series; one, the RAAR bots, were especially… useless.

RAAR a.k.a. Rapid Attack And Response bots, were originally held in reserve by Auto, in case of rebellion. Unfortunately for him, the captain at the time discovered them, and had them destroyed. Unbeknownst to him though, Auto kept the construction of the bots ongoing. And after twenty-five years, these bots were active again. You see, during the time people were on Earth, only four people and four bots were allowed on the ship; The Captain, two support technicians, who were supposed to integrate the tech into the current city. EVE and Wall-e were of course allowed, and M-O, their assistant. You see, EVE had been a confident to the captains over the years, and she had convinced the captain, in 2507, to shut down RAAR production. Auto had decided to continue the making, but decided to put the bots in stasis so no bot would ever discover them. She was continually looking for new threats on the ship. Done the math? I seem to short a person. That man was Sam Smith, the only person who came off the Axiom fit for real work.

You see, two hundred years after Auto received override order A113, his ancestor, the captain discovered it. Auto covered it up though, having security bots bring him to the holding ward, where eventually he was forced to work on damaged bots and move supplies. There was a new captain, and life went on as always. But over the years, his descendants grew to have a massive knowledge of robots. Thus, when Auto was shut down and the Axiom landed, that was what Sam did. He built, upgraded, and repaired robots, and The Captain had allowed him onboard to gather damaged bots, parts from the repair ward, control systems from the bridge, and other things. It was he the Captain consulted when they decided to move the nuclear fusion reactor to a new, safer, location within the city.

He had first met EVE and Wall-e on his first trip into the ship with his load moving bot, to retrieve the main system in the repair ward, which would soon be moved entirely to his large home in a strange place outside the city. It had this funny electric and pointy fence, and only one way in. The floor was entirely made of a strange substance the computer called "concrete". Sam Smith seemed to be paranoid about something. You could say it was bad luck that when the RAAR bots came back online and Auto was reactivated, that all ten were alive, well, and confidant he was down. But you know it wasn't.