This is the rewrite of my first fanfic Magically Delicious. I read over the old version and it was...well it was terrible. The plot was messed up and the characters were really ooc. So I hope I do a better job this time. Ok I hope you enjoy!

Disclaimer: I don't own Naruto or the Akatsuki or Tyler. All I own are my oc's.

Chapter 1: Schools out and Falling

I smiled as I walked through the academy halls. Today was the last day of school and I was heading toward my last class. I went to the Saint Maria's School for the Magically Advanced, in the Magic Realm. I sat down and started to doodle a picture of the beach side hotel I was going to be staying at over the summer.

My teacher Ms. Juliana started talking about Magic Overflow and when I tuned her out. I guess I should introduce myself now. My name is Natalie Beceelia Andrew Yomi, but people refer to me as Natalie. Only really close family and friends call me Nat.

I guess you could say I'm an A+ student, and my behavior in class is rather average.

I was admiring my drawing when I heard the familiar ring of the bell. I smiled. School was finally over, and it's time for me to go on vacation. I shoved all my books into my light blue bag and ran out the door.

I opened my locker and started to clean it out.

As soon as all my stuff was packed up, I left.

The walk to my home was a little difficult and loud, but what was I gonna do. It was the beginning of summer break. I pulled the keys out my pocket and unlocked the door to my 3 story house. I quickly went up stairs to pack my things. I only needed one bag because I made it bottomless. I changed from my school clothes to a white sleeveless shirt with ruffles in the front, and red shorts. I grabbed my white rimed sunglasses and slipped on my flip-flops.

As I made my way down the steps I tripped over my own feet and fell down the stairs.

I shut my eyes waiting for my head on collision with the sidewalk, but it never came. I slowly opened my eyes and realized that I fell right through the sidewalk. I was in enough shock to forget that I was a witch and could give myself wings and fly.

After maybe five minutes of falling, filled with my screams, I landed on hard, solid, ground. And to make things worse I landed head first. My vision started to blur and my head felt like it exploded.

Al I was slowly losing my consciousness, all I saw was a concerned little blonde boy.

Ok what do you think? To those who have read it before it's a lot better isn't it. Ok I wanna hear you opinions. You can say it was horrible, not bad, or needs word. Now remember people reviews equal love. Remember to eat your vegetables. Bye for now! ^^