Hello There!Wolfie here!I´ve been browsing around for quite some time now,but I haven´t posted this fic here yet......why?....I don´t know......nervousness maybe.....Whatever I´ll get crackin......
Disclaimer:I do not own Love Hina,if I did Motoko would be mine,but sadly.....she isn´t......I do however own the character Brendi........
This is my first fanfiction,I won´t reveal anything much here,but I will say one thing.....
It features another character,I know you probably don´t like that,but please read through the first chapters
and maybe I can change your mind.
Now I have been writing and posting this on a forum for a little while,so I have written about 20.000 words already,but I´ll post it bit by bit for now,if just for keeping you on your toes :P
Since this is my first fic you will probably notice as you read on that my writing style isn´t very good at first,
but I get better and my latest chapters are alot better than these first ones.
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Time of history:Late spring after Keitaro and Naru came back from Mol-Mol.
That spring Motoko failed her exams a second time.
After failing Motoko felt distanced from the others, and she hasn´t been the same since.
To the other residents it looked like her obvious attraction to Keitaro lessened,but Motoko felt disgusted with herself and didn´t feel like she was worthy of Urashima,so she stopped pursuing that goal.But even if she has added to the distance once more,Motoko still cares for Urashima, and she curses herself for it.
Now a few months has passed and this is the normal routine of the Hinata-Sou.
This is how it all starts!
A little description of the new char:Brendi Urashima:
One of keitaros father´s flings ended up in a child with a partner of seta´s.
An accident occurs and his mother dies, Brendi was temporarily adopted by Seta who had suspected who the father was.
After showing up at the Urashimas doorstock Keitaros father accept the baby after some argument.
Yet later on the same day he leaves the kid outside an adoption bureau with the nametag "Urashima Brendi".
Now Brendi is 17 and he has found his family again.
Because his mother was of scandinavian origin she named him thereafter.
Brendi is 185 cm tall so he stands out among the japanese, he has neck long brown hair and brown eyes.
He does not have the eyes of a japanese either.
Filled with anger at his unfair treatment Brendi has never actually thought that much of what he would say to his family as he confronted them, but after a loud discussion with his father he was told he had a
brother called Keitaro, that owned an inn.
Brendi looked Keitaro up. And now he stands outside the Hinata Sou prepared to meet his brother.
A day in spring when the sakura flowers are falling gently from the trees, Maehara Shinobu is hanging up the laundry to dry.
She humms a soft tune and goes about it with the expertise of someone who have done the task many times before.
About to go inside she sees someone standing outside the front of the building.
It is a very tall young man with a blue bag wearing a green sweatshirt and black trousers.
Somewhat frightened of this person she, grabs her basket and run down to tell the others.
Standing outside the huge building Urashima Brendi is feeling somewhat intimidated by the whole situation.
If he could convince his brother that he was who he said he was he could probably stay in this massive inn.
If not.......it would be back on the road, stealing whatever food available.
Because with 2000 yen he wouldn´t be able to do much.
Then from the back of the house comes a loud ruccus, like a hundred metallic feet trampling everything in their way.
From the corner of his eye Brendi notices something at great speed.Flinging himself forward
he barely avoids being hit by a rocket.
Turning his head he is confronted by an apparition of utter technology.
A tanned girl with blond hair in a school uniform on top off a massive metal-turtle is charging him while screaming: "NYA-HA-HA-HA."
Every muscle in Brendis body freezes, and hopelessnes creeps up his spine while he is thinking.
Is this how it is supposed to end? Will this be the end of my bastard existence?Will I never experience a woman?´
When it is three feet away the turtle stops and the girl jumps off going.
" Scared ya!"
Still unable to say anything Brendi just mopes. After a second or two of moping
the tanned girl runs inside yelling: Everybody! We got a visitor!"
Now,did you enjoy? Please R&R
