This is my first fanfic so please be nice, BUT constructive criticism is appreciated
Disclaimer: not mine, but I'll check again...
Pairing: either Blaise/Hermione or Hermione/Malfoy, could you let me know which pairing you like?
Stepping off the platform 9¾ Hermione felt a rush of happiness. She was going back to Hogwarts, and this year, she was head girl. There was just one thing missing. As she scanned the crowd, she wondered if her friends were even there yet. She doubted it. It wouldn't surprise her one bit if they jumped on the train as it was pulling out of the station. She'd seen it happen. Sighing Hermione began to pull her trolley towards the train. Well she tried.
"Hey!" she said when it wouldn't budge. She couldn't get another word in though because the next second she found herself being lifted into a huge bear hug. "Hermione dear, did ya miss us!" a rather tall and slender Ron Weasley called over her shoulder.
"Yes you freak now put me down so I can hug you properly!"
As Ron put her down, Hermione heard her other best friend Harry Potter laughing at them. But he was cut short as Hermione launched herself at him and tackled him in a hug of her own."Ummm Hermione….I kind of can't breathe" He struggled to say.
"Guess what you guys!"
"You got expelled over the summer because you are a know-it-all Mudblood and are just now telling your boyfriends because you couldn't bother to do it earlier and you figure that they might notice when you aren't there?"
The smile that Hermione had been wearing since arriving at the platform slowly faded as she turned to look at Draco Malfoy and his dedicated band of idiots; uhh I mean Crabbe and Goyle. A very tall, muscular (quidditch had definitely done him good), blonde (no gel!) god, ahem I mean bastard!
"Actually Malfoy, I've been made Head Girl, not that it's any of your business."
"So the old crackpot strikes again, giving the Head position to an unworthy, filthy, pathetic Mudblood."
"Aww is someone upset that Daddy couldn't buy his way into the Head position? It's ok, we still love you Malfoy" she leered at him. "You're so pathetic. Come on guys, lets not waste our time." And with that she sauntered away with the guys pulling their trolleys and hers behind them.
As Malfoy watched them go, he quietly swore to himself that he would get her back and soon.
Sorry it's not that long but I promise the chapters will get longer. I just felt it was a good place to end it. Please review and tell me what you think.