Disclaimer I do not own Spice and wolf.
Thank you, everyone, who has read my story so far and for all your great critiques. I appreciate all your straight forwardness and honesty, because with out it I will not grow as a writer. I know I'm not good with my grammar at all, I've heard it all my life, and I'm just now taking it very serious, so I'll do my best to read everything several times before posting it, but please keep your positive comments coming I love to read what you think and how to improve.
Vanishing Trooper
Guibin
patri-300
Several hours later, Lawrence comes back inside the Inn to find Horo asleep where he had left her. There were still tears coming out of her closed eyes. He closed the door behind him and
made his way to Horo's sleeping form and picked her up bridal style. Then he gently laid her on the bed and placed the covers over her body. He takes one of her hands in his and gently
caresses it against his "I wish I could take this loneliness away, but I don't know where to start." With that he walks away until he feels a tug on his sleeve. It was Horo but she was still
asleep. "Please don't leave me alone, I don't want to be alone"
He was taken in by surprise; he couldn't deny her request now, not now that she needs the most comfort. He nodded his head and walked up to her. He took a seat on her bed and laid
her head on his lap. She instinctively curled up closer to him and relaxed in her sleep. He stroked her hair and watched over her that night, while thinking in the back of his head that from
now on thing between them will never be the same.
This is my first attempt at a short story hopeful you like it or get it. Please tell me what you think I know its extremely short.