Okay, so I must pause here and ask...
Having taken a break and relaxed and matured as writer and person... I feel this story could benefit from a Rework, from the ground up. So starting today... I am rewriting this story. The basic plotline will remain, but things need beefed up, fixed up, cleaned up. Explained.
Please bare with me, I should have a revised prologue within the week.
Evan
