Okay everyone this is my very first chapter of my very first fanfiction. What would happen if Tris didn't choose Dauntless? Would Four end up dating someone else? What if Eric and Four both liked the same girl? This is rated T, for some mild language, violence,drama and romance. ENJOY!
CHAPTER 1- New year, equals new initiates.
Four's POV
Great another group of new initiates. It's nice to be out of the computer room. It's fun to train the initiates, but some years they can just be a pain. I hope this year isn't one of those groups. I think to myself. You ready, Four? Lauren asks me. When aren't I ready Lauren I say back. She laughs. we are in the pit, waiting for the first initiate to jump off and land in the net. All of a sudden we hear a scream and then a laugh, as the first initiate hits the net. I reach my hand out for them to help them get out. To my amazement, the first jumper is a girl from Abnegation, which surprises me, I wasn't even the first jumper. She is beautiful too. She has striking green eyes, and long wavy brown hair. She is so pretty, and she probably doesn't even know how beautiful she really is. A stiff, the first jumper! Lauren exclaims. Ignoring Lauren, What's your name? I ask her. Katr-, Kat. She says confidently. First jumper Kat I say. Welcome to dauntless, I tell her. I hear another scream as another body hits the net. Kat jumps off, and goes to stand by Lauren.
After all of the initiates have jumped Lauren starts giving her speech. I grab the list off initiates from the table and go threw the list.
Abnegation-Kat
Erudite-Trenton
Candor- Lexi
Candor- Jared
Erudite- Isabelle
Candor- Blake
Amity- Garett
Erudite- Zander
Amity- Gabby
Amity- Brenna
This is going to be an interesting year, I think to my self. We have three transfers from Amity, and a girl from Abnegation. This is Four. I hear Lauren say. He will be instructing the transfers, and I will be training the Dauntless-born initiates. Got it. We heard a few yeses, and a few nods of heads.
Alright, I say I am walking with the transfers. I hear a few comments behind me about how dark and dreary it is down hear, then I hear someone say that it's beautiful. i turn around and see it was Kat. Then again, this all must be so new from her since she was from Abnegation. She seems almost familiar, from when I lived in Abnegation, but then again I could just be mistaking her for someone else. She is two years younger than me so we couldn't have been in the same classes, and I wasn't that social, because it was considered selfish.
After I gave the rest of the tour I went in the pit for dinner. I was about to go sit by Zeke, Shauna, and Eric. Until I saw Kat sitting with the other initiates. I decided to go sit by them for two reasons. One to be nice and to get to know them. But mostly because I wanted to be by Kat. Whats so different about her from all of the other dauntless girls, that I can't stop thinking about her? I sit down by Kat. Hi, four, wat's up? She says. Gosh, her voice is so beautiful, she sounds like an angel. Snap out of it four. She's an initiate, and she's younger than you. Nothing much I reply. You've never really had cake? Gabby asks. No, never. Kat replies. You need to have some, it's one of the best things in the world. She laughed at that. Maybe I'll have to try some. She said. I turned around and saw Eric looking at us. For a moment, I thought I saw a hint of jealousy in his face. Is he jealous of me, we're just having a friendly conversation.
Eric's POV
Why the heck is four sitting with the stiff? I ask. Who knows. Zeke says Maybe he's just trying to get to now the initiates, Eric. Right, I think in my mind. He likes her, I think to myself. Why does he like all of the girls I like? That's it four. Kat will end up dating me. She will fall in love with me. I will not loose. I love her more than he does. She will be mine, she will be mine. He can't just steal her away from me, just because he was a stupid stiff to.
Four's POV
After dinner, I say goodnight to the initiates, and head back to my room. It was actually fun sitting with the initiates. We had fun conversations about normal things. Kat tried cake, and I fell more and more in love with her every moment I was with her. Did I just think that I love her? I did, and I mean it. I laid down and thought of how tomorrow would play out. We are going to start with knives tomorrow. I would make sure that Kat would be kept safe, no matter what we did. I fell asleep that night with one word in my head. Kat.
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