I decided that I was going to write a new story. Tell me what you think of the story and tell me if I should continue it or just delete it. Here it is. I hope you like the new idea even though a lot of people have probably thought of this idea before. What do you think of the title? I know it is just the title of the first chapter but I think that it makes sense. Tell me what you guys think.
Disclaimer: I don't own any of the characters except for the one's that I made up and the plot line. No stealing my characters.
Chapter 1 A New Beginning
Max's POV
After years of being chased and being experimented on, it is finally over. The Flock, including myself, have just saved the world from the evil scientists of Itex.
We were flying home from our tiresome mission in Europe. If you looked over all of us you would think that we were 6 kids who have never eaten, slept or bathed in years and gotten in a fight with a wolf. All of us had tons of bloody cuts and humongous bruises.
We have been in really bad conditions before but never this bad but at least it is all over with.
I must have been thinking about everything that just passed for a while because I was interrupted by Fang, my right hand and my boyfriend. Fang has been my best friend for years but in the middle of all of this we started going out.
Fang flew up right beside me and bonked me on the head with one of his wings. Of course being Mr. No Emotions, he didn't even crack a little smile.
"Max, what are you thinking about?" Fang has always been concerned about me since we became the best of friends. He always says that I never look out for myself but I don't believe him.
You know he loves you Max, which is why he is always concerned about you. Angel, the little mind reader in the Flock, said. Angel is only 6 years old and the youngest member in the Flock. Gazzy, her brother, and she are the only blood relatives in the Flock.
Fang gave me a weird look. I guess I zoned out.
"Just thinking about everything that happened and what is going to happen in the future."
"What do you think is going to happen?"
Hmmm. I never really thought about that. Where are we going to stay? My thoughts were interrupted again but this time it was by Nudge squealing.
I turned my head right over to her. She was talking to Angel. Angel, what are you guys talking about?
She gave me one of her cute smiles. You and Fang.
Now I don't want to know what they are talking about if they are squealing about it. Nudge is the most talkative one in the Flock. It takes a lot to get her to stop talking.
Last but not least, Iggy. He is the only blind one out of us but he has the best hearing. He finds his way around by hearing everything around him. Iggy is also the only one who can cook. The one time that I tried cooking I burnt everything to a crisp and all I was making was toast. His favorite thing though is to make bombs. Almost everyday I find his bombs and material in the weirdest spots. A couple of times I found them wrapped in his underwear. Gross.
Fang decided to bonk me on the head with his wing again.
"What was that for?" I actually got him to chuckle; it was a really small chuckle though.
"You zoned out again." I guess I am really out of it. What did Fang even ask me before?
"Fang, what did you ask me before?" He sighed and gave me a smirk.
"I asked you what do you think is going to happen?" Oh. Well that is a horrible question to ask me right now because I have no clue what is going to happen or even what we are going to do.
"I have no clue what is going to happen. I have no clue where we are even going to go." This time Fang gave me a you-are-really-out-of-it look.
"What if we go to your Mom's house? You said that she is really cool and she doesn't even care that you are an experiment. She did help you out and I think that it is…" I really have to thank Iggy and Gazzy one of these days. They both covered her mouth.
I thought about what she said and maybe that is a good idea. "That is a good idea Nudge. That is actually the best idea that you have come up with. What do you guys think about going to my Mom's house?"
I heard a bunch of okays. "It's unanimous. We are going to my Mom's house."
I hope Mom will be okay with us staying at her house. We won't know anything until we get to her house.
We have been flying for about 2 hours when Nudge, Gazzy, and Angel spoke up.
"We're hungry." I knew the silence wouldn't last very long.
"Max, can we go stop at McDonalds? There is one right there. I can see it from here and I am starving."
"Nudge shut up." I guess Gazzy was getting annoyed by all her talking too.
"Sure we can stop there. Is that okay with everyone?" There was a round of yays but louder than usual.
We landed behind the McDonalds. By the looks of it, it wasn't too crowded.
I was wrong though, when we got in there was a huge line.
We had to wait 30 minutes before we could finally order our food. Iggy went first.
He went up to the cash register. "What would you like?"
He looked like he was thinking for a second. "I would like 3 double cheeseburgers, 2 medium fries, 3 apple pies and 1 extra large coke."
The cashier's mouth went wide open. "Is all that food for you?"
Iggy nodded his head. The cashier was still staring at Iggy. One of the other cashiers got her attention back to her job.
"That will be $12." Iggy handed her the money that we got out of the ATM machine before we got here.
When we all ordered the same amount of food that Iggy had, each of us went through exactly what Iggy went through.
I was the last one to get my food. I headed over to the table that the Flock decided to sit at.
Everyone was staring at us but none of us really cared. We were all used to this by now. The whole time we ate everyone stared at us. None of us had any table manners so we made a mess.
We all finished our food in about 10 minutes. We threw all our trash away and headed to the back of the McDonalds so that we could take off.
"Let's go." We all took off. I can't wait until we will finally be able to relax for once.
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