One of those girls Maximum Ride songfic thing. Better then it sounds... I hope
By nudgeriderox (or me)
So basically… Fang is dating Lissa and Max knows what kind of girl she is and is trying to figure out why Fang likes her. First post AND songfic so please give me some pointers! I kinda changed the lyrics a bit to match it… I hope that's ok. Oh yah I suck at summaries. Ask my teacher. I'm going to rate it T… Just to be safe
Disclaimer! I do not, under any circumstances, own Maximum Ride or any of the characters or plots. James Patterson does. Lucky… I also don't own avril lavigne or her music. But I do own a copy of her CD.
Let us start!
Max
La la la, la la la la
I walked down the halls to the next class. Ugh. I saw Fang and Lissa again. Fang dosnt realize what kind of girl she is.
I know your kind of girl
You only care about one thing
Who you've seen, or where you've been
Who's got money
Lissa is going to use him, money, his car, popularity. She doesn't care for Fang. Not one bit.
I see that look in your eyes
It tells a million lies
But deep inside, I know why
Your talking to him
All her ex's know. Me and the rest of the flock know. Why doesn't Fang see it? Doesn't he hear the rumors?
I know what your all about
I really hope he figures it out
No, She is pretty. That's why Fang is doing this, the looks draw them in. I pull Fang aside during lunch. I tell him…
She's one of those girls
Their nothing but trouble
Just one look, and you'll be seeing double
Before you know it she'll be gone
Off to the next one.
She's so good that you wont see it coming
She'll take you for a ride and you'll be left with nothing
You'll be broken, she'll be gone
Off to the next one.
Off to the next one
All Fang said was that I was jealous. I couldn't handle him with someone else. He mocked me. Then I slapped him for thinking that way. He just walked off. 'Ha.' I thought. 'That'll teach him'
She's gonna be the end of you
At least that's what they say
It's been a while, your in denial
And now it's too late.
He's in denial! I can't get him out. Once Fang is in denial, that's it, Fang is in denial.
The way she looks it makes you high
All the warning signs
With her red hair, her blue eyes
Makes you wanna die
I've seen the way he looks at her. He looks under a trance. Like he doesn't know what she is doing.
I know what its all about
I really hope you figure it out.
'Why do I care? Its his life' I thought
'You love him Max'
'Oh look, It's the voice. And I do not! He's a part of the flock!' I hate this thing in my head. But it can give good advice.
'And your first love.'
'Shut up voice' Sometimes.
She's one of those girls, nothing but trouble
Just one look, and now your seeing double
Before you know it she'll be gone
Off to the next one.
I walked over to Lissa while she is alone. "Why, of all the people in this school, do you choose Fang?" I asked her.
Lissa just calmly said, "He's hot. That's why. And why do you care? I thought he was your brother."
"Well sorry for caring about my family" I practically spat. Man I hated this girl.
She's so good that you won't see it coming
She'll take you for a ride and you'll be left with nothing
You'll be broken, she'll be gone
Off to the next one.
She will just walk out on him. Leave him, after all his money is spent. 'the nerve of the girl' I thought.
'Max focus, focus on saving the world.' The voice said to me.
'Yah well I kind of need all my flock for that voice.' I thought. The voice didn't say anything. Ha!
Fang
You know it's a game, you know it's a game
She keeps playing around with your head
Playing around with your head
She's so insane, so insane
She's the one to blame
She's the one to blame
What the heck? Why am I hearing this? Oh man, do I have a voice like Max now?
'Nope just me'
Oh. Its Angel. 'What, did Max put you up to this?'
'Fang, Fang, Fang. Max is right. I can read her mind. Break it up before she breaks you.'
'For a six year old your really annoying you know that?'
I heard a giggle in my head. It was obviously Angel. I don't giggle.
She's so good that you wont see it coming
She'll take you for a ride and you'll be left with nothing
You'll be broken, She'll be gone
Off to the next one.
I walked up to Lissa. "Fangikins!" She says. It makes me sick.
"We are over. I know what your gonna do." I said.
"Who told?" she says, suddenly nasty.
"Everyone" I reply.
"Oh. Well I can do better." She says and walks away.
'wow.' I think.
Off to the next one.
Max
I watched Fang break up with Lissa. I then proceeded to high-five Angel. "Thanks sweetie."
"Your welcome Max" and the Angel went off to play with her friends.
Off to the next one.
The End!
So, Please R&R! I really need pointers... Thnx!
I'd love to hear your opinion!
Nudge- So would I!
Total- Me too!
Me- Awesome!
Nudge- I know right?
Me- Wait, how did you guys get here?
Nudge- The door was open.
Me- Oh. Ok. Hi. Wanna say bye with me?
Nudge, Total and me- Bye!