ThunderClan
Leader- Ravenstar- dark tabby she-cat with dark amber eyes
Deputy- Rockpool- dark grey tom with strong legs and dark blue eyes
Medicine cat- Darkflame- dark brown tom with blue eyes
Warriors- Thornclaw- golden tom with yellow eyes
Shrewtail - grey and brown tom with amber eyes apprentice Hunterpaw
Birchoak- brown tom with yellow eyes apprentice Yarrowpaw
Whiteflower- milky white she-cat with light blue eyes apprentice Seapaw
Squirreltalon- ginger she-cat with light green eyes
Shalepelt- grey she-cat with yellow eyes
Nightwind- thick furred black she-cat with ice-blue eyes
Hollysky- dark tortoiseshell she-cat with yellow eyes
Flametail – flame colored she-cat with yellow eyes
Dustpelt- big dusty brown tom
Sorreltail – tortoiseshell she-cat with yellow eyes
Ferncloud- grey she-cat with darker flecks and blue eyes
Apprentices- Seapaw-beautiful silver-blue she-cat with ocean blue eyes
Yarrowpaw- light tortoiseshell she-cat with amber eyes
Hunterpaw- light tan tom with yellow eyes
Queens- Skyfeather-long haired white she-cat with odd violet eyes
Leafcloud- ginger and white she-cat with amber eyes
Snowfeather- white with silver flecked she-cat with blue eyes
Kits- Arrowkit- dark red tabby tom with darker red stripes and red eyes
Stonekit-grey tabby tom with blue eyes
Whitekit- white she-cat with yellow eyes
Silverkit- silver tabby she-cat with amber eyes
Stalkkit- stalky grey tom with ice-blue eyes
Batkit- smoky grey tom with large, wing-like shoulders and blue eyes
Pollenkit- grey tabby she-cat with white chest and face, soft brown eyes
ShadowClan
Leader- Cederstar- orange tabby tom with black stripes
Deputy-Rowanclaw- dark ginger she-cat with blue eyes
Medicine cat- Littlecloud- small tabby tom, apprentice, Bluepaw
Warriors- Birdclaw- great big grey tabby tom with big shoulder muscles, apprentice, Firepaw
Treepelt- wiry brown tabby tom
Pinepelt- long, straight ginger fur and amber eyes, apprentice Pinonpaw
Tawnypelt- tortoiseshell she-cat, a formable fighter
Smokefoot- smoky black tom with light green eyes
Graytail- light grey tabby tom with a quivery tail, apprentice Juniperpaw
Chipmunktalon- light brown tom with large front teeth and blue eyes
Rabbitfluff- rabbit-coloured tom, very jumpy and easily frightened
Apprentices- Firepaw- smoky tom, like the embers of a fire
Pinonpaw- grey tabby spotted with blue, blue eyes
Juniperpaw- normal-looking grey tabby tom with yellow eyes
Queens- Aspenleaf- beautiful calico she-cat with deep amber eyes
Followingtail- black and white she-cat with a very long, whip-like tail
Kits- Sparrowkit- brown and grey tabby tom with bright green eyes (Aspenleaf's)
Yowlkit- dark orange tom, almost red with light green eyes (Followingtail's)
Shreikkit- light orange tom with yellow eyes (Followingtail's)
Screamkit- very pale orange she-kit, almost white, with amber eyes (Followingtail's)
Shoutkit- medium orange tom with green eyes (Followingtail's)
RiverClan
Leader- Hawkstar- dark tabby tom with ice-blue eyes and long claws
Deputy- Darkclaw- dark brown tom with black stripes and yellow eyes, apprentice, Crisppaw
Medicine Cat- Willowtail- pretty ginger she-cat, apprentice Palepaw
Warriors- Minnowriver- beautiful silver-grey she-cat with deep blue eyes
Gingertail- light ginger she-cat with a bright orange tail and yellow eyes
Pebblefur- grey tabby tom with flecks of pebble shaped lighter grey splotches
Rippletail- grey and silver tabby tom with ripple-like stripes, blue eyes
Silverriver- beautiful silver she-cat with blue eyes
Beechfur- light brown tom with yellow eyes, apprentice, Runningpaw
Feathertail- pretty silver she-cat, apprentice, Tawnypaw
Heartfur- dark ginger she-cat with kind amber eyes
Wovenlife- tan she-cat with yellow eyes, apprentice, Tanpaw
Apprentices-Crisppaw- light brown she-cat with crisp fur
Palepaw- pale ginger she-cat with pale yellow eyes
Runningpaw- swift dark tabby tom
Tawnypaw- tawny colored she-cat with ice-blue eyes
Tanpaw- tan tom with golden eyes
Queens- Shallowfire- silver she-cat with bright orange splotches, light green eyes
Kits- Streamkit- silver-blue she-cat with ice-blue eyes (Shallowfire's)
Riverkit- light blue-grey tom with ice-blue eyes (Shallowfire's)
Lakekit- dark blue-grey tom with ice-blue eyes (Shallowfire's)
Oceankit- ice-blue she-cat with ice-blue eyes (Shallowfire's)
WindClan-
Leader- Mudstar- mud colored tom with blue eyes
Deputy- Owlfeather- brown and grey tom with amber eyes
Medicine Cat- Kestrelcloud- light brown tom
Warriors- Crowfeather- smoky grey tom, almost black with amber eyes
Haretail- tan tom
Heatherfur- ginger she-cat with heather-colored eyes, apprentice, Damppaw
Breezeclaw- snappy light grey tabby tom
Weaselfur- weasel colored tom with blue eyes
Whitetail- white she-cat
Bouncetalon- bouncy she-cat, apprentice, Sealpaw
Hawkpelt- dark brown tom with ocean-blue eyes
Swiftfoot- swift white she-cat, apprentice Deeppaw
Rabbitbouncer- bouncy ginger she-cat
Apprentices- Sealpaw- ginger she-cat with ice-blue eyes
Deeppaw- dark ocean-blue and grey tom with dark brown eyes
Damppaw- pale ginger she-cat
Queens- Tailflower- light ginger she-cat
Kits- Oakkit- brown tom with amber eyes (Tailflower's)
Birchkit- light brown tom with amber eyes (Tailflower's)
Sycamorekit- dark brown tom, almost black, with amber eyes (Tailflower's)
Saplingkit- very light brown tom, almost white, with amber eyes (Tailflower's)
Other Animals- Robin- small dark tan and orange male cheetah with dark orange eyes
Shadowflight- pitch black she-cat with a glossy pelt and bright green eyes
Raven- a small male snow leopard cub with blue eyes
Squirrel- black and white wolverine female with yellow eyes
Demon- A brown and black male porcupine
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Chapter 1, Robin
"Shut up!"
Robin winced. "Sorry, Squirrel," he muttered.
The stupid wolverine made a face, strutting around the tiny cheetah. "Why can't you shut up, bird brain?"
"I didn't say anything!" Robin snapped. He leaped out of the way as Squirrel lunged at him.
"Just shut up for once, okay?" Squirrel snarled. She snapped her teeth at him.
"Walk away, butthead!" she hissed. She bared her teeth at him.
Robin bounded away, no way could she catch him, he was so much faster then the stupid, overweight, waddling wolverine.
He looked up. The first moon was in the sky, barely a dot against the quickly darkening green. He wished the other two would come up. He loved the big one.
There was a shuffling of feet and a horse cantered into view: his mom.
"Robin!" she bellowed, her ugly yellow teeth glaring against the sun that was sinking in the south.
Her massive sides heaved. "Did Squirrel make your dinner?"
"Carrots, yes," he grunted.
"Good. You do like carrots, right son?"
"Er…"
"Good." The horse cantered off, flies clustering around her eyes.
"Mom!" he called after her.
"Yes, Robin?" came the deep voice.
"Did you find…?"
"No," the horse snapped, "Raven is gone for good."
His poor little brother! Robin sighed with unhappiness. He looked up, there was comfort. The third moon was rising.
Huge and powerful, it filled the whole sky, except for a tiny bit of blue light along the horizon lines. He could see where the great holes in it were, it looked like a crying face. Silver light filled the cleanly paved dark red streets. He watched it with awe.
He lived on the world called Eris. Every inhabitant was born as an animal, and it could change into one other animal. Robin was a tiny cheetah (the size of a large, full grown cat) but didn't know what he could turn into. Some animals never found out, it was highly dangerous to try. You could become a dangerous animal, like a lion or wolf. Then you might lose control of yourself and hurt someone. Robin never had the courage to try and change. He didn't know what he would become. It was often known that dangerous animals like him would change to an animal even more deadly, and lose control. Raven was a small snow leopard, and he could safely change to an eagle. Robin's terribly annoying and stupid two-and-a-half year old babysitter Squirrel was a wolverine, and could turn into a pony. She could become a perfectly harmless animal, so she never lost control of herself and hurt someone.
Robin was one year and six moons, and Raven was nine moons.
His dad was dead, and Raven had disappeared three weeks ago, just like everyone of that age. It was a mystery where they went.
Robin looked around at the tall, thin, square stone buildings all around him. Every one was a light shade of blue. Nobody lived in them, they were solid. The whole world was covered in them. Each was twenty feet tall and five feet wide on every side. They got slightly thinner as they went up, and the sides were carved so the corners were evenly jagged.
And everywhere where the buildings weren't were smoothly paved dark red streets. Bordering each building was a thick set of gnarly bushes that were set right up against the stone walls and spread out about two feet all around until the red street started.
And everywhere in this town (called Burleyville) were holes in the red street. Small caves were carved into the street, where the animals lived. All the streets were covered in them. But as soon as you got out of the towns, the holes ended, and if you went up for thousands of miles you would come across the very cold top of the world, (and if you went way down you would too) that was real wilderness. Trees, flowers, and beautiful flowing streams, all covered in several feet of snow. No ugly buildings and yucky red streets.
Robin always had a longing to go to the top or bottom of the world, but never had. It was so much walking…
He looked up. He enjoyed looking at the moons, but they hid the lights that danced in the sky all day in three thick ribbons of thousands of colors.
Tonight all three moons were full, but when they were smaller you could see the lights. They were called the Aurora.
The young cheetah looked around. How boring his life was! Why couldn't there just be something to do, something to see?
He stood up and ambled around, until he came to a place where the horizon never seemed to end. He walked aimlessly in that direction.
Golden light was sparkling on the horizon line, but the sun went down in the south, this was east…why was there light?
He stood up, his dark amber eyes sweeping the streets. He bounded a little, then settled to a walk.
The golden light was getting closer. After another mile he noticed something. There was a golden path stretching into nothingness.
Robin looked at it. To sets of paw prints were burned into it. He was afraid of it. What was it?
Suddenly something smashed onto him. It was sort of spiky. He lashed out, squealing in pain. Everything was dark now, and the big moon had already sidled out of they sky, so he couldn't see anything.
Then, abruptly, the Aurora blazed into life, making all the neat paved streets and buildings glow with creepy light and color.
Whatever had grasped Robin let go momentarily, and the cheetah scrambled out of his grip. He turned around.
Whatever had been holding him was very strange. Covered in spiky brownish black fur, it had bright yellow-red eyes. It's whole body as covered in this spiky brown fur.
Robin screamed. Never before had he seen such a creature. Nobody he had ever met had changed to or been an animal like this. He turned to run. It leaped on him.
"Where is that cat?" he asked. His voice was different from what Robin was used to hearing. It was so much sharper.
"There was a black cat! Did it come over yet?" The creature smashed him onto the street. Robin looked up into the hateful eyes.
He scrambled away, to terrified to speak. The creature turned and bounded away.
He stood up on shaky legs.
Suddenly something darted passed his sightline, after the creature. He whirled around and dashed after it.
He saw a black tail whisk around one of the buildings. He sprang after it.
But as fast as he ran, he just couldn't catch the stranger.
He bounded foreword as fast as he could.
"Robin! Get back here!"
Well, how do ya like chapter 1? Whoever reviews first gets Hunterpaw's and Seapaw's warrior names!! Please, please, please, please, please tell me how this chapter was!