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SUMMARY:

16 year old, Mikan Sakura fell in love with her infamous seatmate, Natsume Hyuuga who is a popular, cocky, cold and hot guy. One day she sent him a love letter, telling him what she feels about him. It turned out that he returned the letter and grading her a D-. After graduating high school Mikan went abroad and returned to Japan as a Superstar ad a type of girl that anyone can fall for. Will Natsume's feelings for her change? And how will the past affect Mikan now that she is a huge star?

Chapter 1

Mikan stood steadily beside the school's entrance door, patiently waiting for Natsume. She clutched the green envelope and fixed herself. Whew, this may be my very last chance she told herself.

Finally, the time has come. She have already come this far and there's no turning back. She has already decided on this. She will confess her love to her crush for almost 6 years. Who is this guy? He is Natsume Hyuuga, a guy who can make girls fall in love with him in a snap. He is the school's hottest guy. He can be a jock or a nerd. He lies in between of those two categories.

There are three reasons why he's so popular. First, he has a really good looks which includes his messy raven hair that compliments his bloody red eyes and his super hot body (maintained because of he plays soccer really well. He's in the Japan Team and they compete in different places. Oh yes, they also win).

Second, he is super smart, you can consider him a genius, and he is the school's top student. He is the brightest kid not only in their class but in the whole region. His brains are super and believe me or not he doesn't even review for exams.

Third, he is rich. Their family owns HJP or Hyuuga Japanese Bank and also they own buildings, both commercial and residential. Yes, He will inherit those. Just imagine if you have a boyfriend like him. Wouldn't it be paradise?

Mikan just stood still trying to calm herself down. The bell already rung and just a few minutes to go and she will finally confess everything to him.

Not so far away she already saw him. She started to panic like crazy as he passed by her. She kept on saying "uhm, Natsume-kun. . ." and "Well, you see. . . Natsume-kun". He stared at her boldly with his bloody eyes that seemed to sparkle right in front of Mikan.

"Speak up." He said.

"Well, you see, Natsume-kun, I wanted to give you. . ." She paused and handed him the not-so-crumpled green envelope. ". . . This." She finished blushing furiously.

He stared at the green envelope without a facial expression; he's not happy, nor sad, nor angry, nor satisfied, nor amused. He's practically feeling NOTHING.

"Well, you see. I learned that your favorite color is green so I placed it in a green envelope." She blushed even more and her voice's pitch is higher than her normal voice pitch.

He opened the envelope and unfolded the letter and begun reading the letter out loud.

"You know I'm hiding this feeling I has for you for olmost 6 years. I am actually isn't sure if I can handle what you will said once you rid this leter but then, please now that I love you. "He finished a little bit satisfied and slightly angry.

"Do you think I would like a girl who has bad grammar and doesn't know how to spell almost and letter?" He said in a voice that is loud enough to be heard by everyone around them. Mikan faced down feeling a little bit humiliated by what he said. She is a girl and he must at least be conscious that he is actually hurting her.

He pulled out a red pen from his bag and wrote on the upper right corner of her paper "D-".

"At least be thankful that I didn't write F on your letter even if it deserves that grade." He said and dropped her letter on the floor.

Mikan fell on her knees and she crumpled the paper on the floor. Tears fell down from her eyes to her cheeks and down to the floor. She didn't expect him to be that mean. He may be handsome, smart and rich but his heart is made of stone. How can he be so heartless?

So this chapter actually explains what the story is about . . . ish =)) the beginning was what? What do you think? Please review if you think it deserves to have one.

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