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( ) everything in brackets is comments from the author or narrator.
Shivering shiver!!
Always ignored that shiver that just creped up on you?
Well take it from this family, don't ignore the SHIVER!
"Hi my name is Mayte and I will be telling you the story that left the
Stevens with only sad memories and maybe some fatal consequences could be
in this story. I live just down the road from 'Old Creek Mellow'. According
to my best friend Jessica it's haunted, but what person in the right mind
would believe that, I can tell you now that's the exact same thing that the
twins told me when Jessica and me told them that it was haunted! Any way
lets carry on with the story"
Chapter 1
'Dad, are we there yet, I'm bored, I'm hungry and I can't take the wait of
seeing my new room!' said Lesley
'No and stop asking you've asked me a thousand and one times already' said
Mr Stevens
'Yeah Lesley stop it your so annoying!' said Ellen trying to get her sister
angry.
'Shut it before I shut it for you' said Lesley threatening her sister with
her fist.
'You two just pack it in already before we leave you behind, ok?' said Mrs
Stevens.
'Yes mother' they both said at the same time.
It was a long car ride to Cecil Bank and the girls and Mr and Mrs Stevens
were all very tired from driving for 5 hours just to get to a house that
only Mr Stevens had seen. They arrived at "Old Creek Mellow" two hours
later.
As they pulled up the girls gave gloomy looks at the old run down house.
'Do we actually have to stay here?' Said Ellen 'It looks really spooky!'
'What you scared of ghosts?' said Lesley.
'NO!!!' said Ellen.
Chapter 2
The Stevens family ran up to the house all very exited and wanting to go
and have a look inside the creepy old house. When the got there, their was
this old lady at the door with the keys to the house she was wearing all
black and she was staring at the family with disgust. She seemed to be
mumbling something under her breath; she walked forward to meet the family.
'Children, Mrs Stevens this is Mrs Blackbird she's the lady from down the
road who's been looking after the house for the past few years until it was
put up for sale earlier on this year.'
'Nice to meet you Mrs Blackbird, where's the owner of the house then?' said
Mrs Steven
'Well they moved away for family reasons but that isn't important let's get
you settled in so that your children may see the house before it gets dark'
said Mrs Blackbird.
'What do you mean before it gets dark its only 5 o'clock?' said Ellen.
Mrs Blackbird ignored the question and carried on towards the house. The
drive way was large and seemed to be endless, there were these ugly statues
in the corners that seemed to follow you when you moved, the house it self
was very big, the front door was about twice the size of a normal door, and
it was all dark and gloomy.
The Key to the door was different to a normal key it seemed to have a
picture on the end of it and the teeth of the key were all jagged and
misshapen (well lets just say that no one could get into the house if they
didn't have the key)
When they walked into the house the door creaked like that of a scary film.
They got into the hall and it was so big that here was enough room for a
kitchen and a dinning room together (and maybe a bedroom well now I'm
exaggerating but you get the hint that it was big!)
'WOW! This house is amazing I bet you that the bedrooms are massive' said
Lesley.
'You're not joking' said Ellen.
The girls ran off to explore the house whilst Mr and Mrs Stevens were
looking at the downstairs floor. The rooms were all bare there were no
furniture in a any of the rooms except for the living room there was this
old fire place that was painted black and took up half of the wall it
reached half way up the wall and had a very old mirror on top of it, there
was this old arm chair that was all dusty and the colours had mixed. The
living room was the spookiest room out of them all, the bedrooms were just
extremely big and they seemed to be really nice.
To be continued..
( ) everything in brackets is comments from the author or narrator.
Shivering shiver!!
Always ignored that shiver that just creped up on you?
Well take it from this family, don't ignore the SHIVER!
"Hi my name is Mayte and I will be telling you the story that left the
Stevens with only sad memories and maybe some fatal consequences could be
in this story. I live just down the road from 'Old Creek Mellow'. According
to my best friend Jessica it's haunted, but what person in the right mind
would believe that, I can tell you now that's the exact same thing that the
twins told me when Jessica and me told them that it was haunted! Any way
lets carry on with the story"
Chapter 1
'Dad, are we there yet, I'm bored, I'm hungry and I can't take the wait of
seeing my new room!' said Lesley
'No and stop asking you've asked me a thousand and one times already' said
Mr Stevens
'Yeah Lesley stop it your so annoying!' said Ellen trying to get her sister
angry.
'Shut it before I shut it for you' said Lesley threatening her sister with
her fist.
'You two just pack it in already before we leave you behind, ok?' said Mrs
Stevens.
'Yes mother' they both said at the same time.
It was a long car ride to Cecil Bank and the girls and Mr and Mrs Stevens
were all very tired from driving for 5 hours just to get to a house that
only Mr Stevens had seen. They arrived at "Old Creek Mellow" two hours
later.
As they pulled up the girls gave gloomy looks at the old run down house.
'Do we actually have to stay here?' Said Ellen 'It looks really spooky!'
'What you scared of ghosts?' said Lesley.
'NO!!!' said Ellen.
Chapter 2
The Stevens family ran up to the house all very exited and wanting to go
and have a look inside the creepy old house. When the got there, their was
this old lady at the door with the keys to the house she was wearing all
black and she was staring at the family with disgust. She seemed to be
mumbling something under her breath; she walked forward to meet the family.
'Children, Mrs Stevens this is Mrs Blackbird she's the lady from down the
road who's been looking after the house for the past few years until it was
put up for sale earlier on this year.'
'Nice to meet you Mrs Blackbird, where's the owner of the house then?' said
Mrs Steven
'Well they moved away for family reasons but that isn't important let's get
you settled in so that your children may see the house before it gets dark'
said Mrs Blackbird.
'What do you mean before it gets dark its only 5 o'clock?' said Ellen.
Mrs Blackbird ignored the question and carried on towards the house. The
drive way was large and seemed to be endless, there were these ugly statues
in the corners that seemed to follow you when you moved, the house it self
was very big, the front door was about twice the size of a normal door, and
it was all dark and gloomy.
The Key to the door was different to a normal key it seemed to have a
picture on the end of it and the teeth of the key were all jagged and
misshapen (well lets just say that no one could get into the house if they
didn't have the key)
When they walked into the house the door creaked like that of a scary film.
They got into the hall and it was so big that here was enough room for a
kitchen and a dinning room together (and maybe a bedroom well now I'm
exaggerating but you get the hint that it was big!)
'WOW! This house is amazing I bet you that the bedrooms are massive' said
Lesley.
'You're not joking' said Ellen.
The girls ran off to explore the house whilst Mr and Mrs Stevens were
looking at the downstairs floor. The rooms were all bare there were no
furniture in a any of the rooms except for the living room there was this
old fire place that was painted black and took up half of the wall it
reached half way up the wall and had a very old mirror on top of it, there
was this old arm chair that was all dusty and the colours had mixed. The
living room was the spookiest room out of them all, the bedrooms were just
extremely big and they seemed to be really nice.
To be continued..