Chapter One: An Unexpected Move

"Toki Toki City, TIme Nest Entrance" Age 803

"Where in the name of the Universe is he." A woman said tapping her foot impatiently. She was about 5,4 in height, black eyes with short bushy pinkish-red hair and pink/purple skin. She was wearing Potara earrings and robes similar to the worn by the Kaioshin on the Sacred World of the Kai, with pink and yellow with a dark blue tank top.(A/N: Just what she wears normally)This was Chronoa, The Supreme Kai of Time. Despite her role, Chronoa has a friendly, good natured, if somewhat sassy personality most of the time. She did have her angry outburst, that may seem childlike but could still be serious when the situation calls for it.

"Just wait a moment, I just called him a few seconds ago!" A short old man said next to her. He had a white mohawk and mustache, dark purple skin with wrinkles and black narrowed eyes. He wears a typical Kai outfit with teal underclothes(A/N: What he always wears!). This was Elder Kai, The Lord of the Kai's. He is very lecherous and self-centered, but with the capability to make a sacrifice at the right time if the need arises and was wise beyond his years.

"Don't take that tone with me!" Chronoa yelled at Elder Kai with a glare.

"Maybe if you weren't such an incompetent Kai I wouldn't need to!" Elder Kai yelled back with his own glare.

Yeah they did not like each other so much.

¨Incompetent!? I don't need to hear it from a perv like yourself!¨ Chronoa yelled as she looked down on the Kai. ¨I know for a fact you used the Time Scroll to watch over women from other times!¨

¨Y-you can't prove that!" Elder Kai said nervously as he looked away from the woman. Chronoa was about to say something else before she heard the sound of someone landing near them.

They turned their heads to see a man about 6,0 with spikes black hair(A/N: Super Future Gohan hair), light pale skin and black eyes. He was wearing a black and orange jacket, dark green cargo pants and black combat boots with orange tips. He also had a scouter in his hands and a duffle bag on his back. This was a Rukido, a Saiyan Time Patroller.

Rukido had joined them two years ago, after saving him from his planets destruction. He was born 3 years before Vegeta's destruction, but was sent to a planet called Nero the day of his birth with no Saiyan training. He was raised by a doctor by the name of Maria his step mother. Rukido had spent 27 years of his life with no training whatsoever with the exception of flying. It was a life for the Saiyan until it all changed when a member of the Cold Family, Frieza's Family had decided to come and destroy the planet due to rejecting the family some supplies. He tried his best to stop it but to no avail. Lucky he was saved before then by Trunks Brief, the leader of the Time Patrol, before Nero was destroyed. He trained ever since then, to officially join the Time Patrol, to repay the debt he owed them.

"Sorry I'm late I had to go get some things, before the mission." Rukido said with a grin as Chronoa couldn't help herself from blushing. He didn't socialize much unless Chronoa or Trunks were with him, but mostly Chronoa. They enjoyed each other's company and talked constantly about what they did most and found a lot stuff in common. Both loved cooking and loved learning about other planets cultures. Rukido was actually teaching her to cook after tasting what she cooked him the first time. Trunks didn't think to warn him at the time. Elder Kai was about to start yelling at him for not coming sooner before he was tripped by Supreme and had face planted on ground.

"Don't worry about it just try to stay on time from now on." Supreme Kai of Time had said giggling a bit at Elder Kai's misfortune. He got up and started stomping his feet yelling at her for tripping him.

Rukido had laughed nervously at the two as they were arguing with one another again and had decided to wait on them to finish. When they were done they turned to Rukido who had messing around with his scouter. He had found on the way to them trying to see if he could get music playing. He looked up seeing that they were done and had put his new modified scouter in his pocket while walking up to them.

"Well are you done wasting time you brat?!" Elder Kai said saying with a mad look on his face. Rukido only smiled as he sat up and nodded his head while Elder Kai was about to say something else before he was cut off.

"Listen let's just get to work already." Chronoa said as she just smiled and said great as she grabbed his hand and lead him to the Time Nest with a grumpy old Kai following closely by. It hadn't taken to long to get there, it had been on a large island platform which had a small pond and across from it Xeno Trunks home which was just a normal capsule house with some junk out back. The Time Nest was extremely large and had scrolls that had recorded the very passage of time itself. Before I could ask anything I felt a dark ki within the room as I looked around to see where the dark ki was even coming from. Supreme Kai of Time had immediately grabbed it and brought it towards her table in a panic.

"Why is it always this time period that has the most trouble" She had said aggravated. I looked above her and saw the time being shown.


(Scroll Begin)

Goku and Piccolo had their clothes ripped apart as they stared down a Gokuś brother Raditz who had been smirking the entire time. After a few moments fighting Goku had caught his brother in a full nelson in order to hold him down for Piccolo to finish his attack.

"Special Beam Cannon!" Piccolo yelled out as he fired his attack towards the brothers as Raditz eyes flashed red. Before Goku could even react Raditz broke out of his holdout and jumped up in the air allowing Goku to be hit by Piccolo's attack.

Raditz had then fired a massive ki-blast at Piccolo, who was too tired to move and was reduced to dust. Goku fell on the ground next to his unconscious son, Gohan. He screamed in pain as Raditz stomped on his wound suddenly.

"Poor pitiful Kakarot." Raditz said mockingly as he pressed down on his brother's wound, not caring for the screams he was hearing. He turned to his unconscious nephew before smirking as he held his hand out over the boy.

"N-no don't p-please!" Goku pled for his son's life before Raditz had fired a ki-blast down upon the boy. Gohan was no more. "NOOO!"

"Oh shush now little brother." Raditz said as his eyes flashed red and held his hand over Goku face. "It will be over soon."

Before the younger brother had time to say anything, Raditz had fired down upon Goku's head, killing him instantly. He then let out a maniacal laugh as he flew away from the scene towards a city close by.


(Scroll End)

Everyone looked horrified by the turn of events mainly Chronoa due to the fact that it was never that brutal! Rukido looked pissed by the sudden events, he had never liked his race due to their brutality when fighting.

"Bastard!" Rukido said under his breath as he felt his anger rise before Chronoa placed a hand on his shoulder calming him down.

¨Saiyan's are known for their violence. It's in their nature.¨ Elder Kai said wisely before he picked it up and handed it to Rukido. ¨You best hurry up if youŕe gonna stop him.¨

¨For once your right about something.¨ Rukido said as he took the scroll and was about to leave before he noticed Chronoa looking more worried than usual. ¨Whatś wrong Chronoa?¨

¨It's nothing I...I just have a bad feeling about this mission that's all.¨ Chronoa said honestly as Rukido smiled at her.

¨Tell you what, I´ll make sure to finish this up as soon as possible and when I come back… I´ll take you on a date.¨ Rukido said cheerfully as Chronoa blushed deeply. She had grown feelings for the Saiyan, despite their massive age gap, during the time they spent together. She never enacted on these feeling due to not knowing if Rukido ever felt the same way.

¨Well aren't you bold to ask your boss on a date.¨ Chronoa said with a smirk as Rukido rubbed the back of head nervously with a grin.

¨Well I'd be lying if I said I wasn't interested in you.¨ Rukido said as Chronoa lost her smirk and looked down embarrassed. ¨Your special to me.¨

¨W-well then you better hurry up now!¨ Chronoa said as Rukido simply nodded before he held the scroll over his head as he was surrounded in a white light before he disappeared altogether. Chronoa had looked where Rukido had been before she squealed loudly destroying Elder Kai's eardrums as he fell to the ground pain written all over his face as Chronoa had decided to get prepared. She had a date tonight after all!


(Age 751" Crash Pod Landing)

Goku and Piccolo had looked like they had better days than this one. Piccolo entire outfit had been ripped only leaving covering his legs and half of his chest also his left arm had been ripped off and had been bleeding every where. Goku was in a similar state but had no limbs gone just a lot of broken bones as he was trying to figure out a plan to defeat his brother. Gohan had been knocked out after landing a surprisingly powerful blow on Raditz but had been knocked by said saiyan to make sure the brat wouldn't get a "lucky" hit again. Raditz had looked like he hadn't broken a sweat the entire time fighting and was smirking about his pathetic brother and Namekian friend being to weak. He saw his brother charge at him while the Namekian had put two fingers to his his forehead. He had easily blocked every attack and had gotten right behind his brother and kicked him from behind forcing Goku on the ground. He stepped on his back pressing his boot into the man's back with the intent to break it on impact. He then heard his scouter go off as he saw energy coming off of Piccolo as he fired an attack from his fingertips.

"Special Beam Cannon¨ Yelled Piccolo. His fingers had released a purple beam surrounded by yellow ki rings coming at extreme speed hoping to hit Raditz's chest to kill him instantly.

Unfortunately it was not meant to be. Raditz had looked shocked at first but a dark energy had sparked within him flashing his eyes red for a moment had made him dodge to his left a fire a small ki blast that had knocked to tired Piccolo away in a single blow.

¨Piccolo!¨ yelled Goku in worry for his temporary ally.

Raditz had a sadistic smile on his face as he looked over to his brother before his scouter went off again and looked to his right to see a blinding light blinding him and his brother for a moment. When the light had died out a man had appeared with his arms crossed and a grin on his face. This was Rukido.

"Who-who are you?!¨ Goku asked Rukido, hoping he wasn´t a enemy.

¨All you need to know is that I'm here to help you out.¨ Rukido said as Goku sighed in relief while Raditz looked at him angrily.

"What is wrong with you?! Did you fall on your head as well?!" Raditz yelled in fury as another pure blooded Saiyan was defying his race right before him.

"While I may have been born on Planet Vegeta I was raised on Planet Nero without that saiyan training, so nothing telling me to murder everything on sight." Rukido said glaring at Raditz.

Goku had been shocked to see how things were changing but that didn't matter now, right now he needed to help his new found ally in defeating his brother. Goku and Rukido had looked at each other before turning to the injured Raditz who had looked pissed at the kick and had charged at Rukido in hope to giving him a similar punishment. Only to backhanded away by the time traveling saiyan, making him skip across the ground before he landed in the pod crater. Raditz stood up as he glared at Rukido furiously and was about to attack before a bright blue light came from behind him.

¨HAAA!¨ Goku yelled as he fired his attack into his brothers back, making Raditz scream in pain. He turned around at his brother as his eyes flashed red and was surrounded in a dark purple aura. He yelled out savagely as he charged at Goku with the intent to kill, only for Rukido to appear in front of Goku and kicked the evil Saiyan away across the sky.

¨Sorry but your annoying me.¨ Rukido said simple as a flew after Raditz and slammed his fist into his back. The Saiyan screamed out in pain before he was grabbed by his leg and thrown back to the ground and crashed deep into the ground. Raditz was trying to get up before he kicked in his face by Rukido before said Saiyan started punching Raditz repeatedly. He wasn't going to allow him to defend himself. Rukido kept this up before he slamed his fist into Radiztś stomach, making him hunch over and spit out blood, before he decked the Saiyan across the face sending him across the field. Raditz had gotten up before he felt someone grab him from behind. He tried to get out of the grab but felt his power leave him quickly. He turned to see his brother holding him down in a full nelson.

"What are you doing?!" Yelled Raditz clearly scared for his life.

"Piccolo, DO IT!" Goku screamed as he was using all his strength to hold his older brother down.

"Special Beam Cannon¨ Yelled Piccolo. The beam had shot off his fingertips and had gone through both Raditz and Goku leaving no hope for either to recover.

Both had fallen on the ground harshly as blood bleed from their wounds. Goku was smiling about his no their victory and knew that he would be revived as soon a he died, while Raditz was beyond mad for his failure. Raditz had turned his head to the saiyan who had gotten in his way and noticed he was about to use the same scroll that had let him get here in the first place and had aimed his hand right at the scroll.

Rukido had been happy with what had happened though he thought he had sensed someone else hidden in the area but had not since then after fixing history. He sighed as he took his Scroll of Time to return back home for his date with Chronoa. Just before he had used the scroll he heard a ki blast from behind and had turned around to deflect the blast. But the blast had went to the scroll instead of his body connecting instantly destroying his only way home instantly. He had been shocked along with Elder Kai and Chronoa who had been watching the entire fight go on.

...Crap.

(Chapter End)


Omake

¨Special Beam Cannon!¨ Yelled Piccolo.

His fingers had released a purple beam surrounded by yellow ki rings coming at extreme speed hoping to hit Raditz's chest to kill him instantly. Unfortunately it was not meant to be. Raditz had looked shocked at first but a dark energy had sparked within him flashing his eyes red for a moment had made him dodge to his left a fire a small ki blast that had knocked to tired Piccolo away in a single blow.

¨Piccolo!¨ yelled Goku in worry for his temporary ally.

Raditz had a sadistic smile on his face as he looked over to his brother before his scouter went off again and looked to his right to see a blinding light blinding him and his brother for a moment. When the light had died out a woman had appeared wearing yellow and black armor and her hair short going down to her neck and slightly wild. Raditz had never been more afraid, while Goku look curiously at the new arrival trying to see if she was friend or foe.

"M-mother!" said Raditz with a squeak. That's right the woman right before them was the wife of Bardock and mother of Raditz and Kakarot ,Gine and was she pissed.

"What is going on here Raditz I find a way to see my little boys only to see you hurting your little brother and his Namekian friend." Gine had wanted her sons to get along not fight one another. Goku had been shocked to see that the woman before him was his mother and from how high her power level was before he got a sneaky but great idea.

¨Mama big brother kidnapped my son and threatened me if I didn't kill anyone on this planet he would kill my family and friends." Goku had said with a fake sob while Raditz had never looked more scared in his life.

"Raditz!" yelled Gine holding a large frying pan with her eyes looking to promise pain to her first child. No one bullied her youngest son.

"AHHHHHHHHH" Raditz yelled while running away from his mother as she was trying to hit him with her Frying Pan of Doom. Goku, Gohan and Piccolo who had recovered had been sitting in the background eating popcorn laughing the entire time at the elder saiyans misfortune.

(Omake Over)


A/N: The reason I did this was because I made a lot of mistakes I didn't realize and I would have felt bad if I just took out the chapter just to change them so I decided to just rewrite it. Now before you start thinking about it taking to long for me to get back where I was at, don worry. Most of the chapter´s will be the same as the old ones with some differences to at least make sure it isn't an exact copy of the original. Oh and thanks for reading for so long.

Power Levels


Raditz

Suppressed: 662,

Base: 1,200

Dark Energy + Enrage: 3,700


Piccolo

Base: 408


Gohan

Base: 1


Goku

Base: 416


Elder Kai

Base: 5,250


Chronoa(Supreme Kai of Time)

Base: 6050


Rukido

Base: 53,000