Hello guys! This is my first story so please tell me how I did.
Starter Pokemon?
Lacey Din walked up the stairs to wake her children. Lacey instinctively pushed back against the wall as her two twin boys raced past her. "I'm going to get there first," whined the younger twin. "I'll get my first pokemon before you."
"Dylan the elder twin just laughed and increased his pace.
"Besides bro. They'll probably give us the same pokemon because of the twin stereotype." All their lives Dylan and Ryan were treated like the same person because they looked alike. Not this time vowed Dylan as he ran to Professor Aspen's lab... and in to a baby gate. "So," said Dylan. "How's your aspen."
Professor Aspen groaned at the pun. "Dylan go in there to get your pokemon." Dylan stood outside the door waiting. Maybe a squirtle or a totodile. Dylan walked in. To see a dozen newly hatched eevee on the floor. Great! Thought Dylan. In the corner Dylan saw the runt of the litter, lying down by itself. Dylan walked over.
"Hey little guy. Want to come with me?" Dylan knew he would feel guilty for the rest of his life if he didn't take this eevee. As Dylan picked up eevee it yipped for joy and a foot print glowed on it's back. Ryan ran in and pouted when he saw his brother with a pokemon.
"You took the runt, than I take him." Ryan picked up it's poke ball and registered it as his own.
"Oh yeah!" screamed Dylan, "Come at me bro."
"Idiots" came a voice laughing. A boy with hair black as night walked over to an eevee in the sitting in the closet and pulled it into it's poke ball. Dylan saw Profesor Aspen's assistant Nancy tied and gagged to a chair. Dylan shook in anger.
"Eevee let's go!" he yelled as eevee jumped off his shoulder.
"Very well than" muttered the boy, "Go eevee!"
The boy sent out a large eevee. Black as charcoal.
There my first chapter if I get positive reviews I will finish the chapter.