I had read a lot of those naruto stories where naruto is ignored and his parents favor his siblings while he is hurt until he stops trying and stuff, and I liked it so I thought I would write one, but you know by now that if its me, there has to be a twist.

Heres the twist = Naruto is not neglected, his older more mature sister is. Naruto got kyuubis chakra, but his sister merged with the soul, giving her not only kyuubis knowledge but hate for all who do her wrong. I got her name from another story, I don't remember the name of the story but it was a good story.(I liked the name) So enough of me babbling, let the story continue.

I OWN NOTHING

PS. I am focusing on editing this story for now (yay!). I figred if I tried to do them one at a time it would help with the writers-block and taking over all the stories posted and just in the documents. (There are shit-loads)

UZUMAKI-NAMIKAZE MANSION

The day was beautiful. The birds were singing, the sky was blue, an annoying little orange boy was running around screaming about being Hokage. Wait. What?! Oh, yeah, lets find the main character so we can start this. There she is! Lets go to her p.o.v.

(Kitsunaka p.o.v.)

It is not fair. I am older, more mature, and I don't wear that god awful 'kill me' orange! Why cant they train me?! A young girl of about six thought, as she looked at her mother and father teaching her younger brother with loneliness and despair clear in her expression. Her mother, a beautiful women not tarnished by age or childbirth, with long silky red hair and sparkly purple eyes, was showing him how to find his chakra, while her father, a rather handsome man with girly features, was looking on proudly. All of them ignoring the little girl as she left the dojo to go back inside to her room.

Walking into her room, Kitsunaka looks at the child in the mirror. The sad face of a girl with long spiky red hair, golden bangs, emerald sparkling cat-slit eyes, and three whisker marks on each cheek, more pronounced and thicker than her brothers, stares back at her.

I'll show them, they can't ignore me forever. I will become strong without the likes of them. I will not fail.

Suddenly, Kitsunaka feels very tired, so she flops on her bed, and loses consciousness immediately.

MINDSCAPE

Where am I? Kitsunaka thought, taking in the darkness and water-covered ground.

Great, a sewer, now I'll smell bad.

She's brought out of her musing my a deep chuckling.

Well, anyone else want to follow the scary voice. No? Just me? Too bad, ah well, I think I'll follow those red pipes.

As she follows the pipes, she notices that they are getting bigger and denser.

Not creepy at all...

When she gets to the place where the pipes seem to originate from, she notices it's a giant cage, and somethings in it.

"HAHA! My jailer finally decides to visit me! And what a puny little thing you are!" A deep, vicious voice bellows from the darkness withing the cage.

At the teasing remark, Kitsunaka becomes enraged, and yells,"Shut up! I'm sick and tired of people treating me like I dont matter! You will pay!" As soon as her little rant is over, giant greenish-silver chains pop out of nowhere and hold the beast down, making any snide comment it was about to say impossible.

"Now, shut the hell up and tell me where I am and why you're here!" Kitsunaka screams with nothing but authority as she lets the chains around its head and mouth retract.

"Alright, my jailer has some guts, I don't want a petty, useless jailer. To answer your questions in order, we are in your mindscape, a place in your mind, and I was sealed in here."(Que boring explanation about how he was sealed and tragic break down blah blah)

We now find them talking about how they will get stronger to defeat Madara and their hate for Minato(I am just that twisted)

"Well, since you partially merged with my soul, and I like you, we should finish merging. Let me explain before you freak-out. Without my power, my soul has no place to reform, so I will be blood thirsty and power hungry constantly. But, if we merge, my soul will attach not only to your power but to your own soul. You will gain all my power and knowledge. Of course, there are set-backs. You will start to act different, and think different, for I am merging with you, so you will be corrupted. Without my original chakra, and so much power, I would have to mend your chakra to my liking. It hurts like hell, but I will only add one tail at a time so I don't kill you. It will take time, and can happen at any time. For example, you could be having dinner with them, and I think you are ready. You are to leave the area immediately, no matter what, and flee some where no one will find you. I think a place like that exists in Konoha, I believe it is called the forest of death. I don't have much time kit, choose."

"Umm,... I guess we could merge. What do I have to do?" Kit says uncertainly.

"Come forward, like I said, it will hurt so you might want to stay in here." The fox commands, motioning her forward with one of his many tails.

Kit nods and strides forward, until its first tail raises and strikes right through her stomach. It stays there, and red menacing tendrils of chakra shoot down the tail and enter her forcefully, making her mindscape body scream, while her real body is twitching in pain.

"You will awaken soon, kit, and I will be here to teach you all you need. Rest, you will need it my kit."

THE NEXT DAY/ FIRST TAIL HAS BEEN EXCEPTED

As the sun light comes through her windows, Kit groans and moans. The tail transfer hurt like a bitch."Damn, It hurts to move, I wonder..."

Kyuubi, are you in there, or did I just sleep funny?

I'm here, kit, how do you feel?

baaaaaaaaaaaaaaad

HAHA, I told you it would hurt. The transfer is a succsess, I will give you a day or two to heal, then I will give you the next tail.

A day or two! I can berely move, this is gonna be imposible!

Oh, hush, I got all mine at once, THAT hurt like a bitch. Now get ready to train. It will take seven years to get and master all tails. We will have to do two at a time, for one at a time takes too long. Now shut up and act normal, we don't want any problems!

Yeah yeah, Why do I get the felling this is gonna hurt real bad? Your insane laughing doesn't help!

Oh, sorry.

As I said, im re-doing all the current chapters right now. Ill take down the last chapter and re-post it when I'm done editing.