This is a Brothers Grim story, an old story...and I thought it would be a hundred times better than Rapunzel or the Little Mermaid because everyone knows those stories...so I finally picked a story that's not really well knew, creepy and truly shows the twisted minds that the Brother Grimms possess.
This story will have...a few disturbing things and also I'm not telling you the real name of the fairy tale that has inspired this gruesome tale because some of you might be meanies and try to look it up before hand and that might not be any fun. So prepare yourself for a Gruesome Ever After story.
A woman was running up the castle steps, crying. She pulled up her dress to try and run faster as a shadow loomed down the hallway. Lighting erupted and the thunder boomed loudly as she opened a door and hid behind a room.
She covered her mouth, hoping to hide her frightened breathing.
"He...he's a monster." She shivered as tears rolled down her cheeks. She jumped and squeaked as she heard tapping on the window. For a second, she thought it was him. She sighed in relief as she only saw a tree tapping on the window.
"Just stay calm...think clearly." She looked around the room for a weapon, grabbing a poker from the fireplace but she whimpered as she didn't think it was enough to hold him back. She wanted to jump out of the window...but it was just too high...and it didn't matter anyways...
The Window was locked shut, no matter how much pulling she would do. She cried out, feeling hopeless...wishing she could go back in time...wishing and hoping that the horrors she saw would be erased from her mind and wishing that her curiousity didn't get the best of her...she should've knew that something was wrong...she should've knew this was too good to be true.
She cried out as the door was kicked in and a shadow loomed over her. She swung her poker around like a mad woman.
"Please...Please...I'm sorry. Please forgive me!" She cried out...
"I'll never forgive you! YOU BROKE YOUR WORD!"
She cried harder as the poker was knocked out of her hand, she tried to run past him but she felt a sharp pain in her leg that made her fall. She started to crawl away, crying.
"Please...please...I'm sorry...I'm so sorry...I won't tell..." She continued crawling, the figure just walked behind her slowly. It knew that she wouldn't be able to get away. It chuckled, watching her crawl and whimper, it enjoyed the sight of her pain. She cried out, hoping some one would hear her, but to no avail.
She continued crawling until she was at the stairs...That's when it pulled her up by the hair and onto her feet.
"Please...I won't tell...it can be just the way it was...just the way it was before."
"Once someone's broken their word...THEY SHALL NOT BE FORGIVEN!" The figure cried out and stabbed her in the stomach. The woman gasped and coughed up blood...and it let her go...falling down the stairs.
Elsewhere, A lovely girl with long red hair, sat up, she took in a deep breath as the wind blew through the cracked windows. She wrapped her shawl around her as the house was already freezing cold, walked on the dirty, crumb covered floor and struggled to close it. By the time she could close it, she was soaking wet.
As she was closing it, she swore she could hear a mad laughter echoing outside in the dark rain. It instantly gave her a chill.