Is it Wrong to Hold a Grudge?
Wow my first fanfic, I never thought this day would come. I've been reading these for about 3 years and I finally have something really good to write about. Now please be advised I'm not an expert writer so if you read this and are like "What the...what is this crap" I understand. My biggest weakness is my dialogue but I've been working hard on improving it...so I guess let's gets this started. I think, lol
It was a cool and brisk morning when one certain a certain was trying to catch some zzz's. Then when his alarm struck 6:30 am like it does every day so he can be at work at 7. Then the sound of a beeping sound filled his ears. The tired animals eyes slowly opened and pressed the snooze button on his clock
"Five more minutes" the fox says as he drifts back into slumber. Then about five minutes later the fox's phone goes off playing Blind by Korn. The fox grabs his now fully charged phone off the nightstand and sees that his partner in crime is trying to call him.. The fox answers the phone and puts it up to his ear.
Nick's pov
"This is the Wilde household how may I help you" I say groggily wondering why I have been woken up so early
"Well for starters it would be nice if you were not 30 minutes late to work" The bunny said trying not to be loud around the other officers in the meeting room.
"Haha, 30 minutes late you're really just a dumb…" I stop my sentence as I glance over at my alarm clock which instead of showing 6:35 like it should it instead showed 7:30
" It was just 6:30" I say shaking my alarm clock as if that would help. "Dumb thing didn't go off"
"Well if you hurry Nick today could be your day, we haven't started role yet because Chief has been trying to rid his system of some donuts that Benjamin gave him" Judy says in a reassuring yet worried tone
"I'll be there in five minutes" Nick hangs up and quickly jumps into the shower. When in the he begins to
shampoos his hair and then realizes that he forgot to take off his clothes. "AHHHHH!" Nick yells as he takes his not soaked clothes and throws them out of the shower. Once he is cleaned up he goes to his room and gets dressed and grabs am apple as he runs out to his car...Once at the station he passes by Clawhouser who has a rather sad look on his face. Any other day Nick would stop and talk to the pudgy cheetah but now was not the time and he had a good idea why Benjamin was sad when he saw him eat a donut. Nick rushes into the netting room and sees that it's empty.
" Well..well..well, look who is 45 minutes late"
Unfortunately I recognized that dark….evil voice. I slowly turned around to see chief Bogo towering above me with a stern look on his face. I already know I'm late and I quickly think of something to say. Before I said something really witty, judging by the look on his face now was not the time for jokes
"Chief before you probably yell at me for being late I want to say that I'm sorry for being late and it won't happen again" I say with the most sincere look on my face. "I clicked snooze on my alarm and it didn't go off again:
After a few moments thinking about what I just told him chief took a slow deep breath and I notice his stern look fade away.
He pinches the bridge of his nose "Alright I understand, just don't be late again. Because if you are you'll be back to selling pawpcicles on the street. Kapeesh?" I nodded as soon as I heard him say this.
, "Yes sir." I turn around and start to leave the room as I heard the chief give a fake cough
"But before you leave Nick, I can't leave you with just a warning. I don't want everyone to think I've gone soft." He starts to chuckle. I didn't like hearing those words, not at all.
"Well then sir what is it that I need to do?" I calmly says still trying to not make a sarcastic comment so I anger the chief.
"Nick your punishment for being late will be that you have to clean the entire Precinct" Then Bogo bursts out into probably the scariest laugh I've ever heard.
"The entire Precinct, bu..."
"No butts Wilde" the chief interrupts me now in a dead serious tone. I opened my mouth as if I was going to argue. Instead I thought about Judy doing patrol on her own. "Sir what about Judy?" I said think about what she would do while I'm cleaning.
"Hopps will be working with a new recruit. Our second bunny officer by the name of Zach…Officer Zach
Davis"
I was taken back by those words..."second bunny cop." I replayed those words in my head a few times.
"Oh...well that's quite interesting" I say before I leave the letting room still shocked at what I had heard. Once I left the meeting room I quickly went to my office space and pulled up the officer files and looked up Officer Davis. I see that he aced the physical exams and was the top of his class. I then notice he has a profile pic, I then click on it and see that my worst possible fears have come true.
"Oh fuc.."
Judy's pov
When I was informed that Wilde would not be working with me today I just though me might have called in sick today. The chief told me I would be working with our new recruit. Normally bringing a new recruit is just another day for me bit this was different. The reason? Because this was the second bunny recruit, I was so excited and was quite giddy. I haven't seen or heard much about this bunny, I did know that he graduated at the top of the class and was quite the athlete. I leaned against the front of my car while I waited on the new recruit to arrive. Then I saw him, let's just say that my jaw couldn't get any lower. To put it bluntly this rabbit was a supermodel in my eyes.
"Hello my name is Zach I'm the new recruit" he holds his hand out toward me and I shake it and I feel a shiver go down my spine when I hold his hand. Snapping out of it I quickly let go of his hand.
"Well officer Davis I heard you graduated at the top of your class. That's quite the feat especially for a rabbit" I say sizing him up.
"Well I grew up knowing I had to earn what I had so I just worked hard through it. I was thinking about giving up trying to be a cop and then I heard about your story and it inspired me to work harder so I could do what you did."
"Wow that's really cool" I said as felt my legs get weak and I try to once again regain my already messed up composure. "Why don't we get this patrol started" I say as we both hop in the car and drive off for a regular day of patrol.
Nick's pov
I put the dirty mop in the bucket as I take a look at my handy work. Now I'm impressed with paying off my lateness from this morning, I throw out the dirty water and put the mop back in the janitor's closet. Even though I didn't like it the cleaning was a great way to get my mind off what I heard earlier. Still I couldn't keep thinking about Judy working with another rabbit. All I could do now was stay calm and not try to seem desperate around her. With that I sat down at my computer and goofed off before it was time to check out. I walked out of the building and I didn't see Judy's car and I figured she was still on patrol. Still it was really late and she should've been done. I didn't think much of it, with that I started to walk home. About halfway from my home it starts to rain.
"Great, just great…isn't this just the best day ever" I mutter as I pass by my favorite ice cream shop.
*grummblee* I feel my stomach as I see all the ice cream in the store. I decide to get a quick soft serve since it's late and after my hard work today I deserve it. I walk up to the counter and am greeted by a very nice porcupine.
"Welcome, how may I soft serve you tonight (lol). The cute porcupine says.
"I'll take one small blueberry cone please" I say pulling out my wallet
"Why certainly, that'll be $3.50" she says as she fixes my cone. I then give her the money for my ice cream and she gives me my ice cream.
"Thank you and you have a wonderful night" the porcupine says as she waves me goodbye
"Trust me I needed this ice cream to make my day a little bett…." I freeze like the ice cream that I'm holding as I turn around and see my partner, my friend, my GIRLfriend cuddling right there in the booth staring into each other's eyes and they share a milkshake.
" So..uh…..what flavor did y'all get" I saw eating some of my delicious ice cream, the two of them now shocked to hear my voice turn their heads and look at me. With a clinched fist and a mouthful of ice-cream I give my best fake smile as I can't wait to hear this.
Ok...first off if you didn't like this I completely understand. I'm bad at dialogue but I've been working really hard to make them look a lot better Also I've been wanting to write a fanfic for so long and I finally did it! I'm not the best writer in the world so please...please leave reviews and tell me how I can make this story better because I want a story that you want to come back to and read. I believe that in chapters down the road I will have a better understanding on how I want this story to work and with your help I can give you guys and girls what you want. Once again review and don't be nice because it's the right thing to do. I like taking criticism because it'll help me a lot.
Thanks, Jeran