Hi people! This is my first fanfic, and I'm really n-ner-nervous, but criticism is and any other kind of advice is highly in any form is highly appreciated! Thank you!
Prologue
A redheaded teenager was looking up at the sky as she walked to high school. She seemed to be smirking. Taking a deep breath of air, she allowed herself a sadistic smile. An old man from across the street took one look at her and began to back away slowly, with fear in every step he took. He certainly didn't want to be involved in anything that bloodthirsty girl was interested in. And he kept walking until he reached his house, in which he ran inside screaming.
Erza Knightwalker was thinking about the announcement of a new student coming. She began smirking as she thought of a chance to scare the new guy until he feared her very name. She smiled sadistically as different torture methods ran through her head, before her smile slowly melted away into a frown.
Through the corner of her eye, she realized that the old man who had been about to cross the street had just walked backwards into his house, and that she was alone on the street. Yes…She will always be alone.
She didn't set out to become the most feared. At first, it had been an accident. Erza had been cornered by three boys on the first day of high school, and decided to fight. Turned out, their bark was a lot worse than their bite, because she beat them to a pulp. Rumors got spread, and each one was worse than the last.
By the time she got into her second year, people were already calling her a sadistic monster. Halfway through her second year, she started to act the part, as a way of showing her annoyance at the fact that everyone was scared of her. Soon the sadistic grins became a part of her, and she lost the half that used to be so sweet(-ish) in elementary school.
Oh yeah, it was nice of large crowds to make way for her, and it was fun scaring them. But it was extremely lonely. Even Lucy Ashley, part of a club called Fairy Tail, and the school's top wrestler, was scared of her. The reason why the school didn't kick her out was because they too were scared of her. Pathetic old buffoons.
But looking at the cloudless sky, she felt an odd surge of hope. Perhaps it was the blue hue… Looking down at her watch, she noted that she would be late even if she were to sprint. But hey, if you're Erza Knightwalker, you've got all the time in the world. Not because she can stop time. But because everyone (students, teachers, and other faculty staff included) were scared of her…Right?
Yeah…Ugh, I think I did terrible…Anyways, this was a really short preview, and…um… (Hyperventilating) um, I decided to do one about Edolas because I kinda noticed there weren't any about an Edolas high school so…
Knightwalker: Wow, this is lame. First of all you made me weak, second of all this sucks, and third of all, what's with that questioning tone at the end? OF COURSE EVERYONE FEARS ME! I AM THE ALMIGHTY ERZA KNIGHTWALKER!
Me: *whimpers*
Knightwalker: Don't be afraid to review and tell her how bad this story is~
Scarlet: Aw, don't be mean. But yes, review please!
Knightwalker: Shut up and get out! You're not even in this fic!
Me: Someone…Anyone…Save me…T.T