My Love Story!

by Brosette

I love this dorky feel good anime. But I hated the last two episodes with that baker guy and Yukika was just weird. So I came up with a new character of Yukika and got rid of that baker guy all together. I wrote in a screenplay style because there isn't much action and mostly dialog. My version focuses on Yukika as its an add in but keeps the Takao stuff from the original anime.

1. My Girlfriend

AFTER RACE. AT GIRLS SCHOOL, SITTING AT DESKS

FRIEND 1

You want to learn how to fight?

RINKO

I mean if thats what it takes.

FRIEND 2

Do you even know how to fight?

RINKO

Um...no I've never even yelled at anyone before...

FRIEND 3

Well it's more than pulling hair.

FRIEND 4

Or slapping.

FRIEND 5

You can ask Ren to show you some moves.

RINKO

Who?

FRIEND 5

Ren? She's captain of the aikido team even though she's a first year.

FRIEND 2

What no! Don't ask her!

FRIEND 1

Yeah, don't you know about her?

RINKO

Know about what?

FRIEND 2

I've heard that she's had like a hundred boyfriends.

FRIEND 4

A hundred?

FRIEND 3

Yeah, she has a different guy like every weekend.

FRIEND 1

She's a boyfriend stealer.

FRIEND 5

Girl, she's not going to introduce them. It's not like they're ever going to meet.

FRIEND 4

Well...it's not a bad idea.

FRIEND 5

What do you say Rinko?

RINKO

Well, Takao's already fought for me...when we first met. I couldn't call myself a worthy girlfriend if I didn't fight for him.

ALL

Yay!

FRIEND 2

But wait, doesn't aikido take like weeks to learn?

RINKO

Oh yeah...

FRIEND 1

Well whats something you can do in the meantime?

FRIEND 4

You can dress like really hot.

SAIJO GIVES TAKAO TOWEL

BACK AT GIRLS SCHOOL AT DESKS

FRIEND 5

Well Ren has practice today after school if you still want to fight for Takao.

RINKO WAITING IN FRONT OF BOYS SCHOOL SEES TAKAO CARRYING SAIJO

RINKO

(flustered) Uh-I just came by to say I couldn't hand out today. Bye!

RINKO RUNS OFF BACK TO HER SCHOOL GYM

Rinko was out of place in the gym. A dozen girls clad in black and white were tumbling and flying through the air. One in particular; tall, long black hair, arms wrapped in fighting wraps; fit the bill for the infamous serial-dater captain; Ren.

Rinko mouses her way around the mats

RINKO

Ummm...excuse me?

Ren throws her opponent over her shoulder letting out a tremendous yell. Brings arms to side in finishing pose before helping opponent up. Doesn't notice Rinko until a lively applauds catches her attention.

Rinko freezes with all of the warrior girls staring at her.

RINKO

*I must fight. I must fight for Takao*

(Rinko can't move.)

REN

Uh...can I help you with something?

RINKO

You-you're Ren?

REN

Yeah?

RINKO

*oh man...this is her. The girl who'll help me fight for Takao. Don't blow it!*

(bows and begins to ramble on)

Please I'm in dire need of your assistance. I want to learn the art of aikido to fight for my boyfriend. You see, another girl likes him too and they've been spending a lot of time together and what's worse she goes to the same school as him and she's really cute and has big boobs and oh he's such a nice guy who couldn't fall in love with him. But I love him and I don't know what I'd do if I lost him. Can you help me please?

(tears up)

A firm and gentle hand squeezed her shoulder. She looked up and saw Ren smiling softly at her. She was filled with hope then she was pushed over. She plopped down onto the soft mat. She looked up again and Ren was standing above her, still smiling

REN

Just checking your balance. If you want to learn aikido you need to have a good strong stance

Ren offers hand up to Rinko.