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It was a nice day in Sinnoh, Brock decided to make some lunch while Ash and Dawn went down to the lake with all their Pokemon. Everyone was having a brilliant time, splashing around like there was no tomorrow. "it's a nice day, isn't it dawn?" Ash shouted over all the noise.

"Yeah, it's lovely!" Dawn replied

"So when are going back for lunch?" Ash questioned

"Brock won't have finished making it yet!" Dawn stated

"We'll I'm sure we can stay a little while longer" Ash said

"I wouldn't be too sure about that! Look behind you!" Dawn said

"Oh no, a storm is coming! We need to round up all the Pokémon." Ash shouted

"Why did we leave all the Poke-balls at the camp?" Dawn said angrily

"Sorry, don't shoot!" Ash said jokingly while Ash and Dawn tried to round up all there Pokémon.

The storm was fast approaching ash called out

"Guys, Let's get to a cave we don't want to get caught up in this storm its looks like the worst I have ever seen!"

Ash found a cave and was trying to fit everyone in the cave when dawn burst out saying "I have mamoswines poke-ball here!"

"Brilliant we couldn't fit mamoswine in the cave even if nobody else was in there!" Ash cried out as dawn put mamoswine in its poke-ball

"Do you have grotles poke-ball on you? I saw you pick it up" Dawn asked

"I might, I'll check" ash said as Dawn tried to push bunery in the cave

"I do!"

"Quick put him in his poke-ball, before we freeze." Dawn shouted as ash zapped grotle into his poke-ball. Gliscor squeezed into the cave with everyone else, even ash and dawn. "Brrr it's so cold I hope we can get out soon, I'm hungry!" Dawn said

"Everyone huddle up we need to keep warm, we could be out here for hours!" Ash shouted over the newly roaring wind. Ash moved over to dawn.

"Dawn get some sleep I can see you're tired I'll wake you up when I get tired. I'll send Pikachu over to keep you warmer." Ash said sweetly to dawn

"Thanks ash! I am feeling tired I'll search my bag for anything I usually keep a blanket just for this kind of emergency."

"Good!" Ash said after dawn had finished searching her bag.

"What ya find?" Ash asked

"A sleeping bag, some water, 7 small boxes of Pokemon food, some of my poffins, a blanket and some food for us" dawn listed

"Brilliant! You can take the sleeping bag, we save all the food and water until we get mega hungry and or thirsty. Could I have the blanket?" Ash asked

"Yeah, Of course, I'll go sleep with Pikachu and piplup" dawn said tiredly

"Have a nice rest" ash said softly.

Dawn fell asleep quickly while ash was left to try and keep him and all their Pokemon warm. Quite a while later Pikachu came up to ash

"Pika Pikachu!"

"What? Dawns burning up?" Ash quickly made it over to dawn he could see that she was breathing very deeply but also very slowly "oh no! This is bad! We need to get to brock ASAP!" Ash said urgently

"Ash help..." Dawn mumbled

"Shhh don't speak it will waste you energy, I'm trying to get you to brock." Ash whispered to dawn.

Ash had no choice. He had to carry dawn through the storm. "But what am is going to do with all my Pokemon?" He thought

"And Dawns, and Brock's! No what am I going to do?!" So he came up with a plan, "ok guys," Ash said to all his, Dawns and Brock's Pokemon, "now dawn isn't very well. So we need to take her to Brock." All the Pokemon looked shocked, especially Dawns Pokemon they didn't like to see her ill. It had never happened when she had caught them. "Pip pip piplup?" A scared piplup asked Ash. "Oh no don't worry once we get Dawn to Brock then she will be okay." This settled piplup's mind

"Now starvaraptor, can you find Brock for me even through his fog, cloud, snow and rain?"

"Star starva!"

"Thank you so much starvaraptor!" Ash called out to starvaraptor as he flew off. "Now everyone else you need to help me keep Dawns temperature down while starvaraptor is trying to find Brock. Now Piplup use hydro pump on the corner of the cave, and bunery use ice beam and crogunk use brickbrake on the ice!" Crogunk broke the ice into perfect pieces just the right size for Dawns head. "Brilliant pieces crogunk and thank you bunery and piplup! Now gliscor put the ice on Dawns head." Ash thanked the two Pokemon while gliscor put the ice on Dawns head. "I hope dawn will be okay..." Ash thought to himself. Ash started pacing up and down the cave all his Pokemon were worried about him. "Gli gliscor?"

"I'm fine gliscor, I'm just worried about Dawn and starvaraptor when will he be back so he can guide us to Brock" Ash said worriedly to gliscor. "Pika Pikachu!" The mouse Pokemon said worriedly to Ash

"What? Dawn getting worse! Oh no this is bad we need to get to Brock!" Ash said to Pikachu.

"Dawn, Dawn stay with me Dawn! I can't lose you..." Ash said to Dawn softly as Dawn slipped in and out of consciousness.

"Chim chimcar"

"What starvaraptor's back? Yes we can finally get to Brock!" Ash said wishing that it wasn't that cold so dawn could stay warm. "Grotle come help!" Ash said as he threw grotles poke-ball outside the cave. "Now grotle could you carry all Dawns and Brock's Pokemon except happiny. Now happiny could you carry mine and dawns backpacks?"

"Happ happiny!"

"Good thank you happiny and grotle!" Ash thanked them as he loaded all Dawns and Brock's Pokemon onto grotle. As everyone got ready to leave the cave ash went over to Dawn. "Dawn can you hear me?" Ash whispered to Dawn

"Yes..." Dawn said just loud enough so Ash could hear.

"We are going to go to Brock so you can get better." Ash said hopefully

"Okay." Dawn said even quieter. Ash picked up Dawn and wrapped her in the blanket.

"Come on guys let's find Brock." Ash, Dawn and all the Pokemon braved the weather, chimcar jumped onto Ash's shoulder with Pikachu to try and keep Dawn warmer he was a fire type anyway. Everybody trekked on wards pushing themselves forward for Dawn. They all finally got out of the storm but Dawn was rapidly getting worse "Dawn, Dawn are you okay?" Ash whispered to Dawn so nobody could hear and starvaraptor could lead on.

"Ash help... I see the light" Dawn whimpered quietly to Ash

"No, you can't leave me!" Ash shouted out "um what to do? Ah ha Pikachu use thunderbolt on Dawn!" Pikachu used a small thunderbolt on Dawn "owww" Dawn screamed out "why did you do that?" Dawn whispered to ash

"Dawn you were doing to die if I hadn't have done it!" Ash said to Dawn

"Well thank yo..." Dawn started then she blacked out

"Oh no! Let's hurry up everyone we need to get Dawn to Brock" after a long period of time Ash, Dawn and everybody's Pokemon finally made it to Brock...