Chapter 1- It's a trap! Notes Author's notes- Well, here it is, my first EVER attempt at a FanFic. I decided to choose Avatar of all things due to the fact the setting, characters etcetera were well fleshed out, but the story itself was rather clichéd. I thought 'what if I made Avatar 2?' And bingo, the baby was made. All characters (Jake, Neytiri, Mo'at, etcetera are property to their respective owners and crap like that. I only made some original characters, members of an also original species not yet mentioned.) As a somewhat interesting side note, DO NOT CUT ME ANY SLACK BECAUSE IT IS MY FIRST FIC. FIRE THE CRITISISM CANNONS. I would like to note that you should feel free to flame, after all, as the saying goes-
"Haters gonna hate."- Chickenman99
( Sergeant CJC here: I did NOT write this fanfiction! I can't stress enough how much I did not write this. I set a rule not to publish fics less than 1,000 words, but then as I say I didn't write this. A friend of mine wrote this and doesn't have a profile, urgo I get the job of uploading this. Any text, like the example above, is written by the true author. Any words by me will be marked in a similar fashion to this. So to recap, I upload this for a friend and only helped correct mistakes somewhat, it is up before my stuff because it got done first but mine will follow this. Any reviews or flames will be passed to the author.) (Fire away people, Oel ngati kame).
Chapter 1- It's a trap!
It had been about a year after the RDA had left Pandora, and had had been a peaceful one at that. With no humans to pester or slaughter them, the Omaticaya clan had been living a peaceful life at the Tree of Souls. Some almost though the days were going by a bit too slowly now. The clan's recently established leaders, Jake and Neytiri were living in a paradise. It was just them and their clan. No humans, no problem. Or so they thought... It had been an unsuccessful hunting trip for the couple so far. They had ventured further and for than usual, and yet, they failed to find anything. No Hexapede were in their usual hunting grounds today. It was peculiar, even for Pandora to see a beast disappear so suddenly. Neytiri looked around and sighed.
"It would be best if we were to return now, Jake." It was odd for Neytiri to be giving up this easily, for some reason she was acting somewhat out of character, more so as they had gotten further away from the Tree of Souls. Jake, being the stubborn type, was not one to come back empty-handed. They had come all this way after all...
"Not yet, Neytiri," he replied, a note of optimism in his voice. "There's a Yerik around here somewhere." he looked around, a somewhat desperate look in his eye. "There has to be one close by now..." he muttered to himself, walking onwards. Being trained as a marine had made him adamant, and he was sure he'd find one somewhere...
"Jake, I am sure there will be a Yerik tomorrow." Neytiri, however, could be just as unswayable. Despite these protests though, Jake carried on, and Neytiri unwillingly followed. A disappointing failure of a hunting trip later, they had decided to head back. Neytiri was still acting strangely,though...
"I heard something!"
"Where? I didn't hear it..."
"It was over there!" "Look, Neytiri, if you had heard something, I would have heard it too." Neytiri was acting very out of character now. It was unlike her to be so overly suspicious. Jake was confused, curious, and rather worried for his mate. "And what is it that you're so scared of anyway, Neytiri? It's been peaceful for us for so long now I can't think what-"
"I'll explain when we get back." She spoke with a voice as though she needed to do something urgent. She started to walk ahead, when Jake had noticed something in her path.
"Wait, what is... look out for the- LOOK OUT FOR THE-" The trap had clamped onto her ankle with a sickening 'snap!' Neytiri yelped in pain and shock and stumbled. "NEYTIRI!" Jake immediately ran to her aid. From what he could tell, Neytiri's ankle didn't look too badly injured, and the trap had fallen off her leg, presumably broken. 'Is this the reason she's so nervous?' Jake thought to himself. "Never seen this kind of trap before... is this a Na'vi trap? Is some dumb assh-"
"Jake? Is now really this best time for this?" Neytiri was acting as if she was in a rush to get back.
"Bu- but who put-"
"I'll explain later." Jake admitted defeat, sighed, put Neytiri's arm over his shoulder and helped her back to the Tree of Souls.