this is my first fanfiction please review

Chapter 1

The dragon walked through the crowded streets of the scavenger den in which he lived. Although he was only three years old he was still three times the size of the scavengers. he walked on until he heard something coming from inside the house on the corner of the old square. "I'm telling you that dragon doesn't belong here he will only bring us suffering and pain", it was a male voice speaking. "Calm down, he belongs here just as much as the rest of us. We were all born and raised here and so was Void", this time it was a female who was talking. then the man started talking again, "listen Birtha, I don't care if that thing hatched here its a dragon and must be killed if we want to keep on living. I say that we kill it in its sleep that way it can't possibly kill any of us like what happened in the other villages".

"Now Marvin what gives you the right to blame that on Void, you know he is not responsible for that", said Birtha. after hearing that Void went back to the barn that has been his own sleeping area for his hole life and closed the door behind him so that he could be alone for a while to think. Void awoke too hear screaming coming from out side and a sent of fire. There was a sound like thunder in the sky, suddenly the doors of the barn flew open as a scavenger came running in only to be squashed under the foot of a tall dragon who now loomed in the doorway.

The dragon looked around the place and saw a small dragonet with black scales, pulsing red veins, crystal blue eyes, spikes running down his back, a blade on the end of his tail, and a dark blue ruby imbedded in his chest over his heart. " What's this? The scavengers holding another dragon, my queen will be mosst pleased with me."

"Who are you?" Voud asked. Suddenly Void feel sharp pain in his head then pas out after realizzing that the other dragon had slapped him with her tail.

Sorry for the short chapter. please review