Hey so this is my first public fanfic so please review and critique. I love advice and the opportunity to improve so here it is. And by the way the war doesnt happen but the problem isn't completely ignored.
I do not own divergent Veronica Roth is the lucky one to own it.
Will and Christina kiss, a little to sloppily for my taste. All around me is the pounding of Dauntless fists. Then I feel a tap on my shoulder and turn to see Tobias standing behind me. I get up, beaming.
"You think giving you a hug would give away too much?" he says.
"You know," I say, "I really don't care."
I stand on my tiptoes and press my lips to his.
It is the best moment of my life.
A moment later, Tobias brushes his thumb over my injection site in my neck, and I pull away realization dawning on my face. Tobias' lips form a slight frown showing his disappointment.
"What's wrong?" he asks seeing the look on my face.
"Come on," I say. I lace my fingers in his and begin walking away, pulling him along. I notice as I turn around Christina and Will are gawking at the sight. I blush turning my whole face red, my abnegation showing, but i ignore them and continue towards the trains.
When we near the tracks i can hear its approach and feel the vibration in the ground of its power. Tobias and I sprint alongside the car and leap in, easily landing on our feet.
"Now, where are we going?" he asks the question obviously bothering him since it interrupted our kissing.
"Erudite Headquarters," seeing the unspoken question already on his face, I continue,"we were just given a serum to 'track us in case we go missing'. That doesn't sound like the dauntless. Erudite need soldiers, how do you think they are going to get them." Tobias' eyes widen coming to my same conclusion I did.
"What are we going to do?" he thinks up his own ideas and plans as he asks.
"I was thinking that we could sneak in and try to find out their full plans and then intercept them before they can be carried out."
"Sounds good but how are we going to get in without them noticing?" His tone becoming more of his Four self, I like it but i decide i want to lighten the mood for a short amount of time wanting my side of him back. Yes this is a serious matter but I think him smiling would help me.
"I don't know! Am I supposed to think everything up on my own!? I guess i can excuse you since you dont have a brain of your own..." i sigh, teasing him.
"I do, too, have a brain," he says shoving my shoulder slightly from where he sits next to me. Smiling now I see he is slightly back to normal.
"Then prove it," i retort with a smirk.
"Fine," he takes my neck in his hands and kisses me. I kiss back wishing this didn't have to end. He breaks off the kiss and says,"how about we jump off a little early before the buildings and go in the back way through alleys?"
"Tobias! You do have a brain!" I gasp in mock surprise. He smiles and kisses me again. We kiss for all of two minutes before we have to jump. We run through dark alleys towards the center. Finally we reach a back door, Tobias enters a code and the door opens. I have been here before so i know where to go. We quickly find the elevator and go to Jeanines office.
We stop around the corner from the door.
"Update," says Jeanine her crisp voice avid.
"All the dauntless have been injected. We have an hour before they wake up to our commands. The hard drive with the program has been installed in the control room at dauntless headquarters. We are prepared to get the file."
"Good." I still wonder what this file is, oh well.
Tobias mouths for me to check for the clear before running back to dauntless, we have the info we need. I peek ever so slightly around the corner to see nothing. I give him a small thumbs up. We run back to the elevator. We go to the first floor planning to go silently the way we came. When the elevator comes to a stop I hear gun fire outside.
Tobias and I both pull out our own guns and prepare for whatever is going on on the otherside. The door opens and there is my mother shooting down her pursuers.
Hey thanks for reading, sorry its short, keep reading to find out my idea of the rest.
