I had this idea the other day and wanted to see where it would go. Please give CONSTRUCTIVE critiscism. It's my first story. All rights reserved to their prospective owners.
Percy POV
I didn't grow up like most kids my age. I'm a member of the royal family, the Jacksons. My name is Perseus Jackson. And despite being the heir to my father's kingdom, I'm here on a ship in the middle of the Caribbean, surrounded by pirates, being studied by their captain, a beautiful blonde girl with long luscious princess curls.
As my sea green eyes met her stormy grey ones, I just knew that she was thinking about all the ways she could run me through with her saber.
"Excuse me!" I was jarred out of my thoughts by her attempting to get my attention.
"I'm sorry what?"
"As I was saying a moment ago, I am willing to allow you to go back to your family, but you will serve one month with us and if you enjoy it you are willing to stay. Deal?", she asked with a cocked eyebrow.
As I thought it over I knew it wasn't really a choice.
"Okay, deal."
And with that I was released from my shackles as she gave me the personal tour.
"Here's the mess, this is where you will eat all of your meals unless instructed otherwise by myself personally. Over here is the armory, you'll get your sword and pistol later. Here are the cabins, your bunk mates will be Jason, Luke, and Leo. Now I have a ship to run. Go in and introduce yourself to your new best friends."
As I walked in, they were all doing something different. There was a guy around my height with a small scar on his lip with blonde hair and sky blue eyes cleaning a pistol. There was another guy with blonde hair a little taller than myself and hazel eyes leaning against a bunk admiring a picture of him and a girl. The last person was a small latino guy about 4 inches shorter than me shuffling a deck of cards mindlessly.
"Hey, my names –"
"Perseus Jackson. The names Luke. Nice to meet you.", said the guy leaning against the bunk. "That there is Jason and Leo."
The other two waved at me as he said their names.
"Nice to meet you all." I reply.
"Welcome aboard.", says Jason as I close the door to my new home for the next month.
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