I decided that I going to restart this story

I lied on ground in pain. I saw Private Griffen to my right and Sergeant Wallcroft to my left. Both were in the same pain I was in. I look to straight to see Staff Sergeant Griggs get shot in the neck and collapse to the ground. I saw Soap in pain right next to next to Griggs. Soap was looking to his left. He was looking at Captain Price. I try to get up by raising my head but a heard a bullet. After that I don't remember anything after that.

I open my I eyes to say a white room, maybe a hospital. I look too left to see both Captain Price and Soap. Soap was watching TV. It was talking about Imran Zakhaev death.

"Soap," I asked

"Yeah"

"You kill Zakhaev?"

"Yeah but I couldn't do it without Price" He said looking at Captain Price

"So Griggs and everybody else is dead."

"Pretty much besides Kamarov." Some guy came in. I never have seen this guy before. Not in USMC OR SAS.

"Hello I am Private First Class Dalton "DD" Devlin from Task Force 141 and I am here to ask I guy name Soap if he want to join us."

"That would be me."

"So do u want to join"

Soap look over at me "What about Gaz"

"Gaz will stay in the SAS and will be in charge of a FNG name Corporal Jake Matiks and a Scot formerly of the 45 Commandos Private Liam Redmond."

"K, I will join."

"Great"

3 Days later

Soap and I were just about to get let out of the hospital. I went to bathroom and look at the window to my face was cover with scars. I felt my face to see if I was really me. It was. I left the bathroom.

"Gaz the doctor says we can leave now."

1 Hour later

PFC Devlin had drove Soap and me to air port so he and soap can meet with the other

Task Force 141 members.

"So I guess I see yah later" Soap said

"Yeah" I said giving Soap a handshake. Soap got on the plane

"I could give you a ride back to your base." PFC Devlin said

"I good I'll just walk." PFC Devlin then got on plane as it was about take off

As I was walking past a store I saw a Black Skull Mask in the window. Remembering all the scars that were on my face I went in the store and bought the mask.

Once I reach the base I went to the bathroom and look at the mirror to see that the scars were still there. I grap the mask and slip it on my head. I look in the mirror to see that I look like a Ghost.

So tell me what you think of it. Its almost 500 words.