Tell me how you think of this preview, you know so that I won't make something that isn't worth it.(It is supposed to be cut up, as though I've already made the book)

There I was, staring down at the ouiji board my boyfriend left me on my birthday. He knew me so well that he got me something that nobody would've known I'd like. Thats why I love him, he is the one person that takes the time for me. Of course it may also be that he is a hot, bad boy that isn't so bad after all. I miss him so much, the only time I can see him is at halloween, because he is grounded for something. All I have is his ouiji board, I can feel my friend's eyes clueless on me. Shelby poked my shoulder,"What's wrong, Jez?" never seeing me so depressed, makes sense. "Its nothing... well... a good friend left and -"
"Who is it? I never heard of anyone leaving."
Nothing gets past her, she has eyes and ears everwhere at school. All I could do was look towards the dark, morning sky, thinking of a way to avoid her question.

So do you like it so far? If you do, I'll gladly start the story at the beginning.