Okay so I'm starting this story over again because I've mad a few adjustments that I hope will make the story better and probably more detailed. I mean I like teh idea but I didn't really like the writing so yeah...
The woods dark and chilly in the atmosphere of yet another full moon in beacon Hills. Suddenly, out of nowhere, a bright, electric, blue light shone into the darkness of the night. From inside of it two figures came out stumbling and falling on the ground. One on top of the other piled up breathing heavily.
The one on top quickly stood up and helped the other to their feet. The former appeared to be a female. She stood straight, her shoulders squared but her face wearing a frown of defeat. Her hair was raven black, strands reflecting the moonlight and by that you could make out dark blue. They were done in two pigtails. She was wearing a tight red suit, that seemed like a second skin on her, with black spots all over it and a matching mask covering her face. "What the heck is this place?"
"Wish I knew, My Lady," said the figure that was once laying on the cold ground. This one seemed to be male, blond hair totally messed up, with what seemed like two cat ears pinned on his head. His eyes though were green and his pupils like slits. He didn't look pleased either, but anyone could tell that his confusion was now mixed with fear. He was wearing a suit as well, that seemed to be just as tight as the girl's, it was all black, blending in with the night. "I really wish I did...".
Earlier that day:
"Come on, Marinette! We're gonna be late!" the red headed girl said, as she dragged her best friend by the arm, towards the comic shop.
"Alya I know you love superheroes but do I really have to go?" Marinette groaned finally giving in at her friend's grip allowing her to guide her to the shop.
Alya suddenly came at an abrupt stop, after a few seconds she released the blue-eyed girl and turned to face her with a lethal look on her face. "Girl, listen to me very curefully," she said pointing a finger at the poor off-duty-heroine's chest. "Majestia's new comic is coming out today and I'm gonna be the first one to get it. Got it?"
"Fine let's just hope it won't take long, otherwise I'm leaving. Deal?" she sighed and stretched her hand for Alya to shake.
"Deal," she agreed and kept walking. "You know... I heard Adrien talking about Majestia the other day. It looked like he was obsessing over the new comic so he might as well be there."
"What!? Why aren't we there yet? Come on!" Marinette gasped, and Alya was the one getting dragged, this time around.
When they arrived at the shop, they didn't see many people there, which was good because it meant they'd finish early. Alya walked straight to the counter, almost jumping up and down all the way there, to ask about the comic, as Marinette was glancing around to see if there was anything interesting.
"The fact that she's not real like Ladybug doesn't mean that her powers are lame. They're much better than Ladybug's" a young girl around 7 yelled at another one. They looked like they were around the same age. One was wearing a Ladybug costume and the other was dressed as what Marinette recognized as Majestia.
Judging by what she had heard they were probably fighting over the two heroes; one real and one fictional. That's when an older woman approached them and touched the girl's, that was previously defending Majestia, shoulder. "Marisol, come on now. We must go."
They both walked away and out of the store, but the little girl was visibly still upset about her previous encounter with the girl dressed as Ladybug.
Marinette's attention was shortly drawn from the scene, though, as a loud screeching exploded right into her ear.
"I got it!" Alya was back and more excited than Marinette had ever seen her. "Girl, this is it." her eyes twitching. She looked so happy and it almost made the raven haired girl scared. "I got the first Majestia, new comic in Paris."
Even though she was slightly, I repeat slightly terrified, she burst into a fit of giggles as she raised her hand for a high five. The moment was cut short though, by a scream. The girls glanced at each other right before Alya took off, most certainly chasing after the akuma, ignoring her friend's protests.
Marinette didn't waste any time, seeing as the red head wasn't slowing down, she ran into an alley to transform.
"You know Alya is starting to get to the scene faster than you!" Tikki teased, causing Marinette to giggle.
"Well then let's see if we can beat her to it. Tikki, Spots On!" A magical transformation later and Ladybug was swinging from building to building as she reached the block the akuma was at.
When she got there she was shocked to see that the akuma was non other than... Majestia?! Well, if that was the comic book character, then she sure was a lot shorter than the spotted hero imagined.
"This is the best day of my life!" exclaimed a sing-song voice, that Ladybug was able to pinpoint right away. "Second best actually. Coming right after the day I met you, M' Lady." Chat Noir reminded her, wiggling his eyebrows flirtatiously.
"I take it you're a fan of the superhero too, huh?" the heroine teased.
"Only the biggest. I mean her powers are incredible she can teleport, fly, she has super-strength and can open portals to other dimensions or parallel universes. Which I think is the coolest..." her partner started blathering on, making her giggle. He was such a fanboy.
"But she isn't real so I'm guessing that must be an offended fan of hers." the blond hair boy came to conclude.
"Well, no time to waste. What do you say we make your fanboy dream come true?" Ladybug suggested poking his nose.
Majestia was strong and really fast to dodge any attack coming her way. Her teleportation powers were such a bother. One moment she was right in front of them and the next she was vanished. As far as her flying went... Well it was as if she was mocking them without even trying.
"Chat you know Majestia's suit. Is there anything that doesn't fit?" Ladybug urged, struggling to avoid an attack coming her way. She quickly sent out her yo-yo, tying to wrap it around the victim's ankles, but failed as she teleported out of it.
"There's nothing odd abo- Ladybug watch out!" without even giving it a second thought, Chat Noir ran to his partner and pushed her out of the way, of a flying kick the little girl was charging at her from the back.
As Ladybug was falling down from the roof of the building, she dragged the black cat along with her. Before either of them could react, bright green sparkles surrounded them and suddenly they crashed onto each other.
The signature mark of Hawkmoth appeared on Majestia's face.
"What have you done? You were supposed to take their Miraculous!" the villain's voice could be heard inside the little girl's head.
"You said they were the bad guys and they had to be defeated. They could take back their Miraculous, but now they won't be able to bother you or anyone in Paris ever again. They're trapped!" Majestia argued telepathically.
"These jewels belong to me!" the villain plainly stated in a frightening calm voice. "Bring them back!" he yelled making Marisol's head hurt.
That made the, apparently stubborn, girl reply in an equally frustrated tone "I am not bringing them back. you said they were bad peple so I made them pay. They can't come back. Paris is safe!"
"I suppose there is no use for me to keep you like this since you aren't going to bring them back." Hawkmoth sighed. "But I can bring my precious akuma back to me..." he said opening the giant window in front of him.
Even though the two heroes were absent, peace was restored in Paris. Unfortunately, the damage wasn't going to be magically fixed by Ladybug's restoring powers. All the citizens of the City of Lights could hope for, now, was a miracle to bring their beloved heroes back...
"What the Heck is this place?"
"I wish I knew, My Lady... I really wish I did..."
