Very first fanfic plz review!!!!

Disclaimer: All characters are owned by Stephanie Meyer


My heart was pounding faster then it ever had before. It was pounding and ever time it would beat more of it would break and I would feel an overwhelming urge to keel over in pain and sorrow and cry. But I couldn't, I wouldn't. I would keep running until I was far enough from "HIM". I wouldn't let "HIM" find me. If he did I don't know what I would do.

Out of nowhere appeared a person, NO not just any person, Edward. I Stopped not knowing what he would think, not knowing what he would do. So I stared down at my feet trying not to look him in the eyes, those soft liquid gold eyes. Those eyes that held do much love and care. I heard him call my name. I couldn't help looking up at him after hearing him say my name in that soft velvet voice of his.

I looked up and into his golden eyes and I didn't know how he could still look at me with such love and adoration when I had done that to him. When I caused him so much pain. I couldn't bear to look at him. I broke down, I collapsed onto my hands and knees crying. Crying for him to forgive me. I then felt him bend down beside me and just sat there for a bit, probably wondering if he should comfort me or not. I guess he decided because the next thing i knew his cold body was touching me and I was in his arms.

"shh,Bella it's going to be alright"

"No its not, I never should have did that to you Edward, never, and you shouldn't be taking me back in your arms, you should be back with your family, not sitting here comforting me for basically hurting you."

"Its all right Bella I understand why you did it, just don't ever do it again!!" He said as my favorite Crooked smile appeared on his face, but then got all serious and worried again "did he hurt you??"

"No he didn't hurt me but I think he might might have if I didn't run. O god I hope he's not looking for me!!"

"Don't worry Bella, I won't let him hurt you. Now let me help you up so I can take you home."

All I could do was nod and I let him pick me up. He was about to start running when out of the darkness appeared a Jacob. Edward growled and put me down then blocked me with his body. I was terrified, not just for myself but for Edward, Jacob looked very mad. The next thing I knew Edward had left me by myself and they were fighting.