Cold Blood for the Black Hearts
Hi very first post on fanfiction even though I've had an account for months. We're doing poetry in English so here is a practise,I am not very good at writing poems so go easy on me.
Constructive criticism please.
Give me tips and how to improve if you want.
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There she was in his arms.
Innocent and naive.
As if the fates blessed her with this beautiful and robust man.
She did not know the pain he caused.
The pain.
The terror.
Ignorant and blind by his charms.
The man murdered me,ripped my heart and ate it.
That man murdered me.
In cold blood.
She had been warned.
She had been told.
She ignored.
He feast on her pain.
He would beak until she wasn't broken.
He would make her answer to his every whim.
She is dead.
She is dead.
Cold dead.