This is my first story I've ever written in front of an audience. Please tell me if there's anything wrong with it (grammar, etc.). I'm sorry about the line breaks, it didn't look like that in Word.
The diary idea is from cat2772, who wrote the story The Diary of Danger Duck. I asked him/her if I could use the idea. Note how I say him/her, because I never asked if they were a boy or a girl. Well that makes a lot of sence, doesn't it?
Anyway, if anyone knows how, could they tell me how to get those stupid breaks out? And I'm sorry for the short chapters.
As you know, I don't own Loonatics Unleashed or any of the characters in the show. They all belong to WB.
"Hey come on give it back!" Rev desperately screamed, "it's secret!"
"It's not secret anymore," Duck said, and opened up Rev's diary.
Rev, like the rest of the Loonatics, had a diary. This was because Zadavia wanted them all to have one each, and write in it every day. She didn't say why.
Tech was holding Rev back, to make sure he didn't try to grab the diary back. Rev was struggling, doing everything he could do try to stop Duck from reading his diary. But Tech didn't let him go.
"You're not strong enough," Tech said, "and you'd better stop trying, or I'll have to-" Duck interrupted him.
"Oooooh look," he said, "I found something. It's about you and me."
"No don't read that!" Rev yelled desperately, and tried to get free.
"I warned you," Tech said, then started to tickle Rev.
"Noononoo stop!" he laughed, and struggled even more.
"I'll stop if you quit trying to get away," Tech said. "you're not, getting at that diary,"
"Alhehehaharight!" Rev laughed. Tech stopped. Duck started to read the diary out loud.
" ... Duck thinks he's so funny; but his jokes are horrible." Duck read.
"he tries to act like Ace, but does a terrible job of it. We all know he won't be team leader any time in the distant future." He put down the diary.
"So ya don't think I'll be leadin'? We'll just see about that." He continued to read the diary.
" ... he spends too much time admiring himself in the mirror. You'd think he was a girl sometimes." Duck gave Rev a hard look. Rev whimpered.
" ... which is why I left the Barbie diary for him," Duck continued to read, "I made sure everyone else got one before him. Of course, I'm joking, but It was really funny when he was left with that girly Barbie diary. I got this really nice looking dark red one." Duck looked up from the diary.
"It's a good thing you were joking." He looked back at the diary, and started reading a part about Tech.
" ... Tech talks way more than actually helping out the team, of course I talk a lot but at least what I say has a meaning; what he says is just nerd babble junk that no one cares about."
"It is not nerd babble," Tech chimed in, "It's just stuff your little tiny bird brain doesn't understand." Duck laughed at this, and Rev groaned. Then Duck started to read again.
" ... Also, I wish he would stop reminding us how smart he is; we already know. He acts like he's the only one on the team who ever does anything." Tech didn't say anything.
"That's it," Rev said, "There's nothing else in there. Lemme go."
Just as about Tech started to let him go, Duck said something else. "Ah ah ah," Duck said, "We haven't read your whole diary yet-" Duck stopped and groaned. He felt a sharp pain in his forehead.
"Duck, what's wrong?" Tech asked.
Just as soon as it started, it stopped.
"Nothing," Duck said. "Just a pain. It's gone now." He looked down back
at the diary. Rev was wrong, there was more there. He started to read the rest.
" ... Tech and Duck got a hold of my diary today," he read. "I was writing
in it, when somehow Duck snuck up behind me and grabbed it. You would think I would've noticed him coming with my internal GPS, but I didn't for some reason. When I tried to get it back, Tech grabbed me and held me back. When
I tried to get free he started to tickle me. I hate it when I get tickled, so I gave up. And of course, Duck read my diary out loud ... "Duck stopped reading once again.
"Eh... what?" he said, confused. "How did you know-?"
"What are you talking about?" Rev interrupted, "I never wrote that."
"That's strange," said Tech, "how could that be there when ... let me see that. He let go of Rev and took the diary. He studied it. There was nothing there. He gave it back to Duck and said, "I think you're seeing things. You'd better go lay down."
"B-but," Duck said, "It's right there, can't you see it?!"
"No, I don't see anything." Tech said.
"I told you he spends too much time looking at himself in the mirror," Rev said with a laugh, and grabbed the diary back. "Now I'm putting this somewhere safe. The only place I'll be writing in it will be in my room, with the door locked." He left off to his room.
"But it was there, I saw it!" Duck said, "I swear!"
"Rev is right," Tech said, "you do spend too much time looking at yourself in the mirror. And maybe you should've taken that slice of pizza when I offered it. Maybe a little junk food would do you some good."
Duck shivered. He couldn't stand the thought of gross, fatty, greasy pizza... He started walking towards the elevator.
"I'm going for a walk," he said, "maybe that might fix it." He pressed the button to call the elevator, and pressed the ground floor button. The door closed, and the elevator started to move.