Hello :)

That's the first time I've written something like that. I don't know if it's any good so I would be really grateful for some feedback.

Thanks in advance :)

Silence.

No word. No sound. No live.

Just water – Rain… And blood – so much blood.

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Patience.

I sit here and wait.

I wait for the light.

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Darkness.

I'm falling into darkness.

There is no light to protect me anymore.

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Night.

Endless night.

There is no gleam of light; here in the everlasting darkness.

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Fear.

I'm scared. My whole being is shaking.

I'm helpless. Cannot fight – Do not want to fight.

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Coldness.

My skin is all wet and cold from the rain.

I don't feel it – I feel nothing anymore.

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Loneliness.

I've always been lonely. Always on my own.

You had led me. You had given me hope. You took the loneliness away.

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Lost.

You were my light. You were my heart. You were my life.

Without you… where should I go? What should I do? Who am I? – Lost. That's what I am… without you.

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Death.

If you don't come back… what then? What should I do then? Where should I go then?

You said you'll always come back. But what if you don't? I feel like I'm already dead.

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Life.

You're breathing. Your heart is beating. Your hands are reaching out for me.

I'm holding you by my side. I feel you in my arms. I feel your life.

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Light.

Your eyes are shining bright and clear. You're looking at me – You're smiling at me.

I can see the light. The golden glint of eternity – I can see it in your eyes.

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Happiness.

Water is running down my face. It is not rain. No, the rain has long stop by now.

It is my felicity. It is my joy. It is my salvation. Cause you are here.

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Warmth.

I can hear my heartbeat – The same rhythm as yours. Your heart – It beats again!

You wrap your arms around me and nuzzle your cheek into my chest. You're searching for warmth, too.

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Found.

I found you. You found me.

I hold you by my side. You hold me by your side.

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Whatever happens… no matter how often you'll have to die…

I'll always be there to hold you until you find your way back…