this is my first story so please r&r
Prologue:
A dark figure stood in front on the screen. He had dark black hair, red eyes, and light blue skin with fangs.
"What has happened to me?" he mumbled as he remembered what had happened.
He had watched the entire Earth go intangible and the Disasteroid pass through it. He had no doubt Daniel had caused that. He had accepted his life to be a space nomad when it happened. The Disasteroid struck him. Though he had no memory after that he pieced together what had happened. He had gone unconscious after he was hit, therefore causing him to revert to his human form. His human form had died from the lack of oxygen and pressure in space. All that was left was his ghost form which had floated for days in space until he ended up in the Earth's gravitational field. He woke up days later in the middle of the Sahara desert. He then started the long flight back to Wisconsin. He encountered a big statue of Daniel and newspapers in every country talking about Daniel saving the world and revealing his secret. This did nothing but anger Vlad.
Now he wanted two things.
1) He wanted his human form back. It wasn't until he had lost it that he realized how much he wanted it. It was so much a part of him he couldn't stand being ghost-only.
2) He wanted revenge. Jack had left him in the middle of space and now he hated him more than ever. He also blamed Daniel for everything. He didn't know how but Daniel had caused his current condition.
He would start with revenge, and he knew just how to get it.
What do you think? r&r