Mars- A Fate and Nanoha story
Hey everyone im here with another story I was reading some Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha and I thought that the characters would go pretty well with the story Mars so I started to write this and I'm happy I did so here it is hope you like it.
Chapter 1- the beginning
The first portrait that I had ever drawn was of a 17-year-old girl that I had titled "Mars." Mars signifies two things; one is the plant and the other is a soldier, the god of war.
Fate's POV
I was going to the hospital to see a friend of mine but I got lost because I had never been in the area before so I got lost that was when I had seen this girl sitting on a bench so I went up and asked her
"Um, excuse me… ?The university's medical center is supposed to be around here somewhere. Do you know where it is?"
With that she quickly drew out a map for me I was surprised and she never said a word to me. The map was also really easy to read.
"Huh? Hey… wait!" Before I could get that out she was already running away with her back to me. "What was that all about?"
Nanoha's POV
"Nanoha? What's wrong? You look upset." My mother asked as I walked into our apartment.
"I saw someone that I don't like at the park." I told her while I took off my shoes.
"Someone that you don't like?" She asked me.
"She goes to my school. She's just some jerk." I told her as I walk toward the living room.
"Don't tell me she did something to you…?" She asked looking at me with a worried look on her face.
"No, she just asked for directions. She probably doesn't even realize we go to the same school." I told her while shaking my head. But, I know her…. She smokes cigarettes behind the teacher's back… and that kind of stuff. I don't like her. I thought remembering the time I saw her smoking and making out with that girl behind the school.
Fate's POV
"So, you lost consciousness… Chrono?" I asked
"Yeah. It was a huge crash at the opening race for the Grand Prix. The Doctor said it's a miracle that I'm even alive." He told me as he lay in his hospital bed.
"So what's going to happen with the Grand Prix now?" I asked he turned to me and gave me a smile and told me.
"I'm retiring. Obviously. Even if I wanted to keep race I can't with this body." I just looked over to the end of the bed where his leg should be.
"Is your leg really gone?" I asked not really wanting to believe that it was gone that he had really lost his leg.
"Yeah, it's gone. My right leg is history from the knee-down. To be honest, I thought I was done-for this time. I lost control on a corner. My body was floating in the air, and the next thing I knew, everything was dark." He told me I just listened.
"Were you scared?" I asked he just looked at me and told me
"No. I actually don't really remember. It was like I was dreaming. Fate?" He called out to me with that worried look on his face.
"Huh?"
"Quit looking like that. You were totally spaced out. It's sick to be so into hearing about someone almost dying!" He told me. I shook my head.
"No, it's not that I was just trying to imagine what it's like to die. 'Cause everyone dies, but nobody can explain what really happens. I mean, you experience it and then Bam! You're gone from this world. That's why it's so interesting." I explained to him. Then the door opened.
"Hey Fate you came to visit!" The woman at the door told me as she brought some flowers in
"Amy…" I called to her.
"It was kind of a hard to find this place, wasn't it?" She asked me as she put the flowers on the table next to Chrono's bed.
"Yeah, but I had someone draw me a map on the way here." I told her pulling out the map from my pocket.
"And you just crumpled it up. Hey…" She said as she straightened the map yup looking at it." There's a drawing on the back… Wow! Look, it's really beautiful!" she handed me the drawing and I just looked at it. It was a drawing of a mother and her child. I had never seen anything like it before. "See? Now it won't get crumpled." She told me as she handed me the drawing that was put into a folder to protect it.
"Thanks. How much was it? I'll pay for it." I told her as we walked out of the gift shop.
"Don't worry about it, it's just a folder. But, I'm surprised. I would've expected you to just throw it out." She told me
"Oh yeah… I don't have any artistic talent, so a drawing like this is amazing to me." I told her looking at the drawling once more.
"Well, Fate… you ride so fast on your motorcycle. Chrono says you're either incredibly talented or incredibly stupid." She told me
"What? Is he Trying to piss me off?" I asked her.
"It's his way of giving you a compliment. See here's proof." She said handing me a key.
"The Ducati Monster! He's giving it to you." She told me.
"No kidding? Are you serious?" I cried out I cant believe he was giving me it.
"Shhhhhh… We're in a hospital. Chrono can't ride it anymore, and it's to heavy for me." She told me I just gave he a light smile.
"It really is heavy when you ride it naked. The bike tends to lean if you push it too hard."
"What kind of riding are you doing on the highway? You should only be maxing it on the race track!" She yelled at me
"So, I guess we won't get to see Chrono on the track ever again." I said looking at the key that ones once my friends. It was hard to take in that this man that I had seen on the track so many times was not going to be racing anymore it was still a big shock.
"He's still alive… He lost a leg, but at least god let him keep his life." I told he pulling her into me for a hug as she let it out. I wasn't the only one that was in shock she just clung to me and cried for a minute.
"Fate, please promise me you wont do anything too crazy." She told me once she got a little bit of a hold of herself. I just smiled and told her.
"I'll be okay. Besides, no one would cry over my death."
"Don't say that! If you died I would be devastated. So would Chrono. There's always someone who cares. Someone whose life would simply stop. You just don't know it or you haven't met them yet." She told me There's someone out there… I though well that would be nice to have that someone.
Normal POV
"Hearing Fate say that it'd be fine if she died… I can't stand seeing her so cold. I wonder if she's not afraid of death" Amy told Chrono sitting next to him in the hospital room.
"It's one thing if she's not afraid. With Fate, it's something worse. Her reckless riding is just a game to her. If she dies, the game's over. If she stays alive, she's lucky. I couldn't ride the way Fate does. It's as if she has fun Gambling with her life. She's only 16. How'd she get like that anyway?" Chrono wonder how Fate could have gotten like this how she had got to the point where she thinks that life is just a game.
TBC
Ducati- the Famous Italian Motorcycle
Riding naked- riding a motorcycle with the cowls removed
Sorry I was going to have this be long and only put up 15 chapters for this but I was having a little trouble with thinking of some of the positions of the characters so I'm asking for some help from those of you out there that no the characters please help I have two spots I'm not sure of but how ever I will take the roles for all but the main character is taken as you can tell because this is a Fate and Nanoha story. Also the roles shown in this chapter it in place I'm not taking them out also Alicia's role has been decided so all roles are open for
Fates best friend that likes Nanoha
Fates ex-lover that bullies Nanoha then becomes her friend
Fates ex-girlfriend that wants to take her back
Someone that Fate "saved" and claims to have a crush on Nanoha and tries to kill them
I'm going to start the next chapter hope to get some help with the roles, also I would like it that the characters would not go into striker's A, also would like to know what you guys think of this please review