Hi! Here's the third episode of "Sonic Adventures!" Before we go into the story, I'd like to say something about my writing. Have you seen how I wrote in "Not So Happy Campers (Part 2)?" I have decided to do a mix of script format and the way we're supposed to write. Remember, this will only be TEMPORARY. The poll is still going on, so remember to vote on there. Anyways, let's go on to the first chapter!


Monday, August 30; 8:25 a.m.

Sonic and his mother, Aleena, have just stopped at the front of Emerald Elementary. Aleena was feeling stressed out because Sonic kept whining and whining about what they were talking about earlier.

Sonic: Mom, why do I have to stay after school?

Aleena: Because your father and I have to run lots of errands and I have a doctor's appointment at 3:15!

Sonic: A.M. or P.M?

Aleena: P.M!

Sonic: Why can't I just stay at Knuckles' house like Sonia?

Aleena: 'Cause Sonia doesn't go to school and Mrs. Shard said she's "too busy" to have more than one person at her house. And besides, your school has a waiting room, remember? (Waiting room? Really?)

The Mc'Newman pair stops in front of the Waiting Room. Aleena tells the woman behind the booth, "Excuse me, but can I have Sonic Mc'Newman be in the Waiting Room after school? It'll only be two hours."

Woman: Two hours?

Aleena: Yes. My husband and I have errands to run and I have a special doctor's appointment is at 3:15.

Woman: A.M or P.M?

Aleena (now really mad): P.M!

The woman looks down at Aleena's seven-month-pregnant belly and nervously says, "Oh, so that's why you have a special appointment! I'm so sorry!"

Aleena: You should be. (turns to Sonic and changes her mood) Have a good day at school, Sonic. You promise to be here after school?

Sonic: I promise.

Aleena was about to walk away until Sonic says, "Wait! (Aleena stops in her tracks.) Mom?"

Aleena: Yes?

Sonic: Why are you mad at me?

Aleena takes a deep breath and says, "It's not you...it's me."

Sonic: You're mad at yourself?

Aleena: Yes...it's just that...everything's all in my head. I really don't want to do errands. I just want to take a nap. Have a good day at school, okay?

"Okay," Sonic says as he walks into the Waiting Room.

The waiting room is a place where kids hang out before and after school to watch TV, play games, do their homework, and all kinds of other things. Sonic sees his friends and he runs up to see them.

Sonic: Hey, you guys!

Hannah, Barbra, Charlie, and Parker: Hey, Sonic.

Barbra: Just so you know, Hannah and I aren't "guys." We're girls.

Sonic: Yeah; so?

Barbra: So what?

Sonic: I can call you a guy if I want.

Barbra: Whatever.

Charlie (changing the subject): Hey, Sonic; what was going on with your mom?

Sonic: She's mad at herself for some reason.

Charlie: Why?

Sonic: I don't know. She's just tired. And I think it's because of the baby she's having.

Hannah: Is that's why she's fat?!

The other kids turned towards the group wondering, What the heck are they talking about?

Everyone was beginning to feel awkward and Barbra suggests to Hannah, "Um, how about we don't ask that, okay, Hannah?"

Hannah: Fine...

Charlie: Your mom's having a baby?

Sonic: Yeah.

Barbra: I just love babies!

Hannah: Yeah! They're so cool!

Parker: What? No, they're not.

Everyone felt offended by Parker's opinion and Hannah asks, "What are you talking about?!"

Parker: Think about it. All babies do is sleep, poop, and cry. They're not interesting. I should know because when my little sister was a baby, she did all that.

Sonic: So? Sonia used to do all that, and look at her now. She's all grown up!

Parker: Sonia's not grown up. She's two years old.

Barbra: And besides, I'll bet you used to do that when you were a baby!

Parker: Oh, please. I'm too cool to sleep, poop, and cry. My sister's almost four and she still does all that.

Just then, the woman from the booth walks up to the kids and says, "Um...please don't shout in the Waiting Room. Anyways, here's a new kid I want you to meet."

The kids then see a male magenta purple chameleon. He has golden yellow eyes, a peach colored muzzle, and a yellow horn-thing on his muzzle (I think that's supposed to be his nose...). He is also wearing a black sweater with a white shirt under it, blue jeans, and dark purple shoes with a black stripe on it.

Sonic: Hey, new kid!

The chameleon was looking shy so he said, "Hey," in a small voice.

Hannah: I can't hear him!

Sonic: He said "hey." (turns to the chameleon) My name's Sonic. What's yours?

Chameleon: Espio...

Hannah: I still can't hear him!

Sonic: He said his name's Espio! Gosh! (turns to Espio) Sorry about that. My friends are idiots.

Everyone feels offended and they start leaving Sonic and Espio.

Hannah: We're not idiots!

Parker: Yeah!

Barbra: I actually know how to write my own name!

Charlie (who's now crying): You're so mean!

Sonic feels bad for himself after what he said about his friends. In order to change the subject, he asks Espio, "So...what class are you in?"

Espio: Room 3; Ms. Cornwall.

Sonic feels even more disappointed because he's in Room 1 with Ms. Hardberry.

Sonic: Oh...(now half-smiling) Parker's in that class. He's the yellow fox with the bad attitude. I don't know why I'm friends with him in the first place.

Espio: I know how you feel.

Sonic: Really?

Espio: No...

Just then, the bell rang for class. Everyone except Sonic and Espio ran out of the Waiting Room. Ms. Hardberry came in, looking for Sonic and sees him with Espio.

Ms. Hardberry: Sonic, it's almost time for class. Why aren't you lining up?

Sonic: 'Cause...

Sonic interrupts himself by crying. Ms. Hardberry turns to Espio and asks, "Do you know what happened to Sonic?"

Espio: Yeah. He called his friends idiots because I'm new here.

Ms. Hardberry: Oh, cool! What class are you in?

Espio: Ms. Cornwall's.

Ms. Hardberry: She's a fun teacher. Listen, why don't you hurry along to your class, while I get Sonic fixed up?

"Okay," Espio says, and he runs over to where his class is.


What do you think? Did you like the way I wrote? What did you think of the chapter, story-wise? I thought it was depressing, especially when Sonic called his friends idiots. Let me know in the reviews, and I'll see you in Chapter 2!