Disclaimer: I do not own any of the original Max Steel members, or any
labels, products, or cars mentioned in this story. However I do own Lizzie.
She's mine mine mine! (
This is story takes place three years in the future. Lizzie is now eleven, and just as much trouble. ?
Chapter 1
Keep Your Eyes to Yourself
Max: Do you ever get that Déjà vu feeling? That feeling you done this before? The feeling that says "you know what happened last time run away". Just like burning yourself twice on the same iron. It's. The Leeds Zone.
Location: Del Oro Airport
Mission: Pick up Lizzie from airport
Operative(s) Rachel Leeds and Josh McGrath
"Josh!" Lizzie came running up to Josh. She threw her arms round him in a hug. "Hey Lizzie. Long time no see," Josh said hugging her back. "Yep not since last year," Lizzie replied smiling. "You know I really missed you," Lizzie said sincerely. Josh said nothing. Rachel elbowed him in the side. "Uh I missed you to," he said rubbing his side. Lizzie rolled her eyes. "I'm glad you're here," said Rachel coming over to hug her niece. "Thank you Aunt Rachel," Lizzie replied. She looked at her Aunt's hand. "Oh I see Josh still hasn't gotten the guts to ask you to marry him," Lizzie remarked. Both Josh and Rachel's face turned red. Josh coughed. "Lizzie I told you. Rachel and I.." "Are just friends," Lizzie finished. "Yeah yeah I've know. Well in that case you better stopped checking her out from the corner of your eye. No one enjoys someone's outfit that much," Lizzie said smartly, as she walked past Josh. Rachel turned and followed after Lizzie trying not to seem embarrassed. "Here we go again," Josh muttered. He grabbed Lizzie's bags and followed after the two females.
Location: Josh's Car
"Why is everyone so quiet," Lizzie asked. No one said anything. Josh looked straight ahead at the road, and Rachel stared out her window. Lizzie sighed. "Did I say something I wasn't supposed to say?" Again only silence. "Ok I give up. I'm sorry I pointed out that you were checking Rachel out Josh, but if it makes you feel any better. Aunt Rachel was checking you out too!" "Lizzie," gasped Rachel. "Really," asked Josh excitedly. "Josh," snapped Rachel. "What," cried Josh. "Men," retorted Rachel looking back out the window. "Well that was interesting,' Lizzie commented. "That reminds me. How is Berto doing?" "Fine," replied Rachel, still a little ticked off. "Yeah with no thanks to you," Josh muttered. "Josh," yelled Rachel. "What?! Stop calling my name like that. I'm a grown man and I can say anything I care to say," snapped Josh. "Fine go on being the uncaring jerk you are," Rachel snapped back. A curious look came over Lizzie's face. There was obviously an under current here. Something was going on between the two of them that had them both on edge. And as a certified genius it was her job to find out what.
Mission Status: Complete Orders: Survive rest of Lizzie's visit. Notes: Don't check out Rachel around Lizzie.
Yeah that was embarrassing. Lizzie just brought out what I was doing with no remorse. But what can I say. Things that are hidden come out to the light. Especially when you're in. The Leeds Zone.
Ok I thought I'd try a sequel. Sequels are really bad a lot of times. But I'll try to make this one as good as the first story. Tell me what you think. Read n Review!
This is story takes place three years in the future. Lizzie is now eleven, and just as much trouble. ?
Chapter 1
Keep Your Eyes to Yourself
Max: Do you ever get that Déjà vu feeling? That feeling you done this before? The feeling that says "you know what happened last time run away". Just like burning yourself twice on the same iron. It's. The Leeds Zone.
Location: Del Oro Airport
Mission: Pick up Lizzie from airport
Operative(s) Rachel Leeds and Josh McGrath
"Josh!" Lizzie came running up to Josh. She threw her arms round him in a hug. "Hey Lizzie. Long time no see," Josh said hugging her back. "Yep not since last year," Lizzie replied smiling. "You know I really missed you," Lizzie said sincerely. Josh said nothing. Rachel elbowed him in the side. "Uh I missed you to," he said rubbing his side. Lizzie rolled her eyes. "I'm glad you're here," said Rachel coming over to hug her niece. "Thank you Aunt Rachel," Lizzie replied. She looked at her Aunt's hand. "Oh I see Josh still hasn't gotten the guts to ask you to marry him," Lizzie remarked. Both Josh and Rachel's face turned red. Josh coughed. "Lizzie I told you. Rachel and I.." "Are just friends," Lizzie finished. "Yeah yeah I've know. Well in that case you better stopped checking her out from the corner of your eye. No one enjoys someone's outfit that much," Lizzie said smartly, as she walked past Josh. Rachel turned and followed after Lizzie trying not to seem embarrassed. "Here we go again," Josh muttered. He grabbed Lizzie's bags and followed after the two females.
Location: Josh's Car
"Why is everyone so quiet," Lizzie asked. No one said anything. Josh looked straight ahead at the road, and Rachel stared out her window. Lizzie sighed. "Did I say something I wasn't supposed to say?" Again only silence. "Ok I give up. I'm sorry I pointed out that you were checking Rachel out Josh, but if it makes you feel any better. Aunt Rachel was checking you out too!" "Lizzie," gasped Rachel. "Really," asked Josh excitedly. "Josh," snapped Rachel. "What," cried Josh. "Men," retorted Rachel looking back out the window. "Well that was interesting,' Lizzie commented. "That reminds me. How is Berto doing?" "Fine," replied Rachel, still a little ticked off. "Yeah with no thanks to you," Josh muttered. "Josh," yelled Rachel. "What?! Stop calling my name like that. I'm a grown man and I can say anything I care to say," snapped Josh. "Fine go on being the uncaring jerk you are," Rachel snapped back. A curious look came over Lizzie's face. There was obviously an under current here. Something was going on between the two of them that had them both on edge. And as a certified genius it was her job to find out what.
Mission Status: Complete Orders: Survive rest of Lizzie's visit. Notes: Don't check out Rachel around Lizzie.
Yeah that was embarrassing. Lizzie just brought out what I was doing with no remorse. But what can I say. Things that are hidden come out to the light. Especially when you're in. The Leeds Zone.
Ok I thought I'd try a sequel. Sequels are really bad a lot of times. But I'll try to make this one as good as the first story. Tell me what you think. Read n Review!