What's That?

Hi, this is my first fanfic, so I don't know whether it's any good. Any feedback about it would be gratefully accepted.

I thought this up a long time ago and thought it was about time I put it up and see what people think.

This is a short first chapter to start, I just want to see if people think it's a good story line and then I can go into my detail and explain things a bit better

So here it is enjoy

Ginji Ameno lived in the limitless fortress, with no family, but where did he come from? Did he have a mother or a father maybe a sister? What if he knew she existed, but never told anyone, even met up once in while when he disappeared for a couple of hours.

What up with that then?

Present day

The door opened, with two young men stumberling through, because of how wet they where. The girl behind the counter quickly went for some towels and Paul the owner of the Honkey Tonk looked over his news paper and spoke,

"Yo, Ginji you have a visitor."

This made Ginji react, he looked up from his soaking clothes and looked around, but didn't see anyone in the café except his other friends Natsumi and Paul. He looked back toward Paul when the door to the bathroom opened and a young girl walked out, Ban saw the young lady and was about to react as he does for the ladies when Ginji saw her to, but his reaction was alot quicker and more confusing for Ban to process.

She looked up seeing him in front of her, she needed to see him, she needed to tell him, but he wouldn't want her to do it, he would forbid it. He cared so much for her since they found each other. He never wanted her to stay in the situation she was in, But she had no choice.

The girl smiled up at him and it faded just as quick. He knew she wasn't happy and something was wrong.

"What's wrong, Iza? What happened? Did they find out about you?"

She quickly put her hand up to stop him, she moved around him and went to the counter, "Excuse me sir, would you mind if we use your backroom so we may speak privately. There is something that my brother and I must speak of."

"BROTHER" Was the only thing that was chanted from all three very surprised friends of their once trusted friend.

Ginji didn't react to this or even look at them, he just moved behind Iza and moved to the backroom. Everyone was silent in the café, Ban was confused, Natsumi was amused and Paul was shocked.