Hi There!!!
I'm new at this, so don't be so hard… =P
The main idea for this story wasn't mine, I read a great fic from Alice Danielle, called "Remember Me" (see in my Favorites), and couldn't help myself from thinking about that rich plot… so I made my own version of it.
I don't wanna make anyone sad or copy concepts, but I couldn't stop writing. You must read the original version though.
Special thanks to my great friend and beta, Mikky (who also introduced me to fanfics world), and my lovely little bro Deco! They had the patience to read this first and give me some tips!!!
Hope you like it!
Please, review!!!
Kisses ^-^
(Bella's POV)
Chapter 1
First Awakening
I opened my eyes but couldn't see much because of the blurred vision, it seemed like I was waking up from a long and distant dream I couldn't recall. I only felt my head aching. I raised one of my hands to my head, to try to understand what was going on, and only met a huge bandage all over. Something might have happened! My other hand was too cold, like it was dead, and then I realized it wasn't exactly my hand, but something hard and strange around it.
I blinked my eyes, trying to focus on something. After some seconds I saw a white ceiling, not too high, in a white and peaceful room. It seemed to be a hospital. As I looked around, I noticed a small crowd staring at me, strange people with worried and concerned expressions.
I felt confused and ashamed, I didn't know them… I didn't even know why I was there. What have happened? Have I done something wrong? Why are they here? Who are they?
More questions than I could bear popped up into my head, and now the pain I felt was like hell. I screamed and that was enough for all of them to start talking around my bed. For an instant, it was like a buzzing of disconnected voices that only made my head ache more and more. But I could hear a calm and respectful tone asking them to be quiet and give me some space.
After breathing a little I was feeling a bit better. I looked at my other hand now, the cold one, and noticed someone was holding it. I followed the hard and icy arm until finding out that I was staring at amazing golden topaz eyes. They were too intense to be true, almost suffocating me with feelings I couldn't even understand besides pain and worry.
"Hi!" I blinked and realized that besides me there was a boy, almost like a Michelangelo's David sculpture, with bronze hair and wide eyes, analyzing me. I remained quiet… what should I say?
Glaring at the others I saw more six people like him, the same pale skin and unique eye color. Next to the boy, stand a tall blond man with serene face wearing a white and pristine doctor uniform. Behind them, a small and graceful friendly girl with short spiky deep black hair holding hands with a honey-blond tall guy who seemed a little awkward in the room. In front of my bed, was a caramel-colored hair woman stood with a gentle smile, and at her side next the wall, there were other two people. Another couple, I assumed, a tall and muscular curly-dark-haired boy with a goofy face and a stunning blond observant beauty.
On the other side of my bed, close to me, a native-American strong and gentle guy who seemed to be older than myself. He stared at my face almost the same way the bronze-haired one did, with an intense gaze. The two last people seemed more normal, a curly-short-haired man dressed like a cop and a slim woman that seemed to have cried a lot in the last hours, or days.
"Hmm…. You are a doctor, right?!" I tried to say loud enough for the blond man to hear, but it seemed just a whisper coming out of my mouth. They all looked surprised and confuse after my statement. "How long I have been here? This is a hospital, isn't it?! Why…," I couldn't finish. How could I ask who all these people were, and why they were here?
He glimpsed at the boy holding my hand for a second and beamed at me with gentle eyes, as what he was about to say was obvious. "Yes, Bella, you are at the hospital. It's been two days since the accident. The exams show you are fine, but you still need to rest your head. You hit it very hard this time, and at the same place of your last incident two years ago, in Phoenix."
"Oh… I see…" Bella?! Is that something I was supposed to recognize? Phoenix?! Last accident?! How many times have I hit my head? "Doctor, can I talk to you in private, please?" My voice was almost begging for the rest of them to leave. They seemed nice, but I didn't want strangers in my room.
"Of course", He waited until we were alone, the only one who seemed to want to stay was the bronze-haired boy however, after a while he did what I had asked as well.
"Doctor, I don't want to be rude or something, but…" I breathed deeply, trying to draw some courage. "Who are these people? Why they are here? What is this Bella? Who is she?" I took another breath, resting my pounding head on the pillow. "I am sorry, but it's so confusing… there are so many questions… they make my head hurt…"
I caught him by surprise, I could tell. He analyzed me with a glare, searched through a folder with some hospital papers, maybe exams, and sighed, sitting on a chair next to my bed. "What can you remember about yourself?" His voice was patient and encouraging.
I closed my eyes and tried to call something… anything back to my mind. Blank. "Nothing!" I was talking more to myself than to him. It was like, for the first time, I have realized that I had nothing in my life; in fact, it looked like I hadn't even had a life before this moment! I didn't have a name, a place to go, or a hope besides this damp room. I felt a warm drop falling down my face, I think I might be crying now.
I have 3 more chapters ready to go (ok, almost, they just need some final adjusts!), so, until I can publish them, tell me what you think about this one!
Next chap.: Edward's POV!!!
Lots of Kisses ^_^
