In a World of Magic
Hi! This is the first fanfic that I've ever written/ typed up. So please only constructive criticism! So, the plot of this story is:
Amu is a human who lives with a vampire named Ikuto and nymph named Tadase. She learns that both of them are magical creatures, and tries to decide what to do. Along the way she falls in love with a certain vamp. Tadase gets mad, blah blah blah, the norm. He ends up killing towns people as an escape for his feelings, but it's against the law for nymphs to kill humans because nymphs are supposed to be peaceful. He's gets put to death penalty, and Amu becomes a vamp and has to go to the vampire king because of it. AMUTO!
Ikuto- Wait… I thought you didn't own us. -_-
Amu- Yeah! You don't own us!
Erstel- I know, but if I did you guys would have run off to Europe together already.
Amu & Ikuto- Awwwwww…
Chapter 1
Amu's POV
As I drove down the street to the huge condo I'm sharing with two other collage students, I looked around the crowded city. "Wow, the city is huge!" I turn into the parking lot I see a dark blue sports car with black cat bumper sticker. I laugh a little under my breath, until I turn to get out of my car a see a dark green minivan with flower magnets all over in. The next thing I know a girl with medium shoulder length, blond hair. So I'm thinking 'Ok so that explains the magnets and the minivan'.
But then as I'm unpacking my car the girl starts walking towards me and I realize that it's not a girl! IT'S A DUDE! That made me lose it, I cracked out laughing. "Hahahahahahahahahahaha!" "What's so funny?" Oh shit, it's the girl- I mean guy.
Tadase's POV
As I was getting into my car, I saw a beautiful girl with bright pink hair. I decide since I'm good looking I'll go and talk to her and get her to like me. But, as I'm walking over to her, she breaks out in laughter. "What's so funny?" She looks up with a shocked look on her face and automatically smiles instead. "Oh, nothing" I look behind her to see her trunk stuffed with bags and furniture. "Want some help with that?" I asked politely with a little extra nymph charm. "Uh, sure. I could really use the help!" Wow, she has a great smile. "So, where do you want all this stuff? Sorry, I'm guessing you're in this building. But what floor? (A.N. - It's one big building but there's like 5 or 6 different floors with several rooms on each floor.)
Amu's POV
Oh crap! I zoned out thinking about him in a mini skirt and he said something. "Sorry, I wasn't paying attention. Whatca say?" Shit, now he'll think I was checking him out… Oh well. "I asked what floor you're moving to." "Oh. Floor numero 3" I held up three fingers to be cute. He just stood there with a shocked look on his face. "What's wrong?" "That's the same floor as me…" I took a minute to process what he had just said, "WHAT!"
Ikuto's POV
I was looking out the window in the vacant room, when a hot pink sports car with bumper stickers or magnets or something of eggs? At least that's what they look like from up here. Then when the driver actually gets out of the car, my jaw literally drops to the ground. Her hair is the most beautiful shade of pink and she looks so spunky wearing a black mini skirt, a white t- shirt with a large red X in the middle with a matching hair clip in her pig tails that reached her hips. "This'll be fun" I smiled and turned around, and then I heard the laughter. I looked back at the window to see her laughing at Tadase, not that he could he could tell what she was laughing at. "I like her already." In the middle of the loud cars and motorcycles and such I hear her actually speak, but what she said is more important. "Floor numero 3," it was like magic to my ears and the 3 finger thingy was so adorable. The pink haired hotty was going to be in this exact room later and better yet, she was going to the same collage as me.