Okay this is my first fanfiction so please give any coments that you can but dont be harsh so enjoy
"help us, please someone help us." a young boy said silently in a cage holding a little toddler of the age three. "I dont care who" The demon saw the boy in the cage and smirked "what do you wish" The boy looked down at the sick sleeping toddeler and looked at the demon " I want the people that did this dead!" and a contrack simbol began to form on his eye.
Third person prov
The sun was just starting to peak through the sky when the butler came into a room that had two sleeping lumps on a king sized bed. "Young master, Young mistress it is time to wake up". The two lumps began to ster and as the covers were moved a boy that appered to be thirteen wrose and streched. When he look down at a young girl that appered to be no older then seven began to ster. " good morning young master" the boy only noded tward his butler as he bagan to list his schedual for the day. The young girl finaly began to rise and rub her eyes. "good morning ciel" she said sleepaly as the leened on her older brother, " good mornin cillia." the older boy spoke as he patted the young childes head. As sebastion began to serve tee he told ciel of the events for today and that they would be having a visitor. this pirked the young childs intresst. " realy, there will be someone visiting?" the young girl asked. " yes but he will be here for buisness so dont ask him to many questions" replied her brother. As they made there way down to breckfast sebastion couldnt help but think how innocent the young girl was, even after everything that had happend to her and her brother. They looked very similer, it was as if they were twins. The siblings had the same hair color although hers was fell down to her waist in soft waves. And her eyes were the same as her brothers. Just by looking at the older brother you could tell the deep love he had for his baby sister. She was the only thing in his life that he truley cared for. Ciel had grown cold twards the world and never truly smiled to anyone but his younger sister. He never let her out of his sight even when he went to investigate cases he always had her with him. As they arrived at the dining room sebastion left to go get the meal. Once cilla was hellped into her seat and her brother had sat down thats whne it happened. When finny was staring into space the young master threw a dart at the back of his neck. finny gasped in surpride and bounced around in pain. "what was that for master" finny asked ciel "no, reason it was to be expected" he said calmly not even looking up from his paper. Cillia look surprised but was soon destracted when sebastion gave her breakfast , " thank you sebastian" her bell like voice said. sebastian gave a bow and a small smile to the young child. After breakfast ciel was walking to his office with cillia trailing behind him and stopped to look at the portrate of there late parents. Cillia looked at the people in the picture as strangers. She was to young to rember them. Ciel just hufed and took his siters hand and continued his way to his office. Later that day when sebastian was getting everything ready for there guest he heard the office bell ring. As he got to the office he knocked three times before opening the door. When he walked into the office he sae cillia playing with a doll house ciel had placed in the room for when she gets bored. " what is it you need young master" he said to ciel. ciel looked up from his paper " im a bit hungery id like something sweet for me and cillia to eat." he said." im sorry young master but that would ruin yours and the young mistress appitite." he stated calmly. "i dont care about it make us a parfrait" he said "im sorry" said sebastion, ciel tskd and stood up to look out the window. " fine then but one more thing, remove the portrate from the stair case" sebastian looked surprised as ciel caried on " i am the new head of the phantomhives" he said as he stroked his ring. Sebastian smirked and bowed "yes my lord" after sebastian had fixed the mess the other servants had made and had preapared the siblings to get dressed he went out to great there guest. The italion man was impressed by the garden and when he came inside the mansion he saw ciel at the top of the stair case and cillia hiding behinde ciel, she was very shy around strangers. Later ciel had led his guest and sister into the drawing room and started playing a strange game. Cillia was reading a book on a chair next to her brother. "the eastern india factory is doing extrodanry well, we are looking to expand an..." " Bewithched by the eyes of the dead,blast seems i lose a turn" ciel said interupting the ittalian man "nows the perfect time" he said keeping a fake smile on his face " i was hoping that if you donated more money to the company it would be a great investment for you.." "its your turn" said cillia as she to was paying close attention to the board game having grown bored of her book. "oh right" said the italion man feeling a litle irritated by the small childs interruption. "so i just spin this.. five space""lose a leg in the enchanted forest now you can only move half the number of spaces, its your turn again i lost a turn remember" "oh right well lets see... 10 spaces" "no thats five" said cie. "what?" said that man,"you lost a leg remember" ciel said with a strange glint in his eye. " oh my what a grusome board game should your sister be watching and is there a way for me to ever get my leg back?" said the italion man."im afraid once something is lost, one can never hope to retrieve it again" ciel said darkley stroking his ring "your body is burnd by raging flame" he said scaring the man alittle. At that momen sebastian came in anouncing dinner. After dinner they were made there way back to the drawing room. When theyentered the room ciel said " lets finish the game" the italion man looked surprised and said " but i do have another appointment" but by the look he got from ciel he sut up immidiatly. "well alright but would you mind if i use your phone. "sure answered a bored ciel. Cilla was watching them with tired eyes and sebastian noticed this. " young misstres i belive it is past your bed time" ciel kissed his littles sisters head goodnight and sebastian stook her to her room dressed her in her pink nightgown that went down past her ankles making her look evern smaller and she was out befor her head even hit the pillow. Not long after she was woken by a scream in the night startled she ran to her door and ran into sebastian on his way to the drawing room. "what is it my lady?" he asked the small child "i thought i heard a scream. She answered rubing her eyes. " Sebastian felt his cold hear soften for the girl. Though being a demon and loved noone he felt a soft spot for the little girl and was very protective of her. "no little one you didnt now lets get you back to bed. He said as he led her back to her big fluffy bed and covered her and she fell back to sleep slowly.
So what did you think of the first chaper im open to any and all sugestians as you know this is my first fanfiction so i would acept any ideas and let me know if you want me to continue this so thanx for reading.