Wonder Quest
Hola peeps! This is my first time EVA writing a story and letting other people see it! I am so excited!I f you don't understand anything that's happening, don't worry, it will probably become clearer later on in the story. If you actually DO read to the end even though it's a miserable story PLZ REVIEW! I wanna know what I did wrong so maybe I can fix it in the future! Believe me, the beginning of the story may sound stupid, but by like the third or fourth chapter you like probably LOVE IT! Anybody who read this is AWESOME!
WARNING: The beginning of this story may sound bad, but please read it all the way through for the most pleasure.
It was a beautiful day outside. Well, for me, it was! There was a huge snowstorm last night. To my surprise, the following day, school was closed! Now, what almost every child would want to do is go outside and play in the big piles of snow. Once I was finished with my homework, and told Mom I was going out, I went outside into the winter wonderland.
Since it was still snowing, the temperature outside was decent. I immediately jumped into a pile of snow and yelled, "Snow angel!" My cry of happiness woke up my next-door neighbor Tegon and his older brother, Hogan. Tegon was five and Hogan was 15, just 3 years younger than I was. Their mother, over-protective to her children in my opinion, made them wear everything possible to wear in the winter. When they came out, they scared me because they looked like monsters to me! "It's okay, it's me, Tegon and Hogan." Tegon said, taking off all the clothes unnecessary to wear in this weather. Just then, Hogan glanced over at the snow angel I made a while ago.
"What is that?" Hogan questioned me. I stared at him, open-mouthed.
"You don't know what a snow angel is?" I said, still shocked.
"Yup!" they both chimed in. As I explained what a snow angel was, the man who lived across from us, Geteva, stared out the window.
"Look at them," he muttered. "Playing in the snow and messing up the neighborhood!" "Oh, lighten up, Geteva," Geteva's very smart partner, Malbu, said.
"Even I want to go outside and make a snow angel!"
"What is that?" Geteva asked.
ZAP! "Yay! Another perfect snow angel!" Tegon said triumphantly. It was perfect. Too perfect.
"Hey, Tegon," I said. "How did you do that?"
Tegon looked around cautiously and whispered, "Promise you won't tell anyone?"
"I promise!" I whispered back.
He spoke slowly and softly and said, "I have super powers!" I looked at him. He looked serious.
"Ha, ha, ha! Super powers! Good one, Tegon, now tell me how did you really do it?" I said, laughing, stopping once he stopping immediately once he gave me a glare.
"I told you! I do have super powers! See?" he said, putting his finger out. Out of his hand came a blast. Not a huge one enough to destroy something (Or someone) but enough to melt the snow underneath our feet to make a snow angel. "Of course, I can make WAY bigger blast than this one. I got tired of plopping on the ground and standing up over and over again so I did this!" he said cheer fully, pointing to his perfect snow angel.
"Oh my gosh! Did that hurt you? Did you always have that power? Does Hogan have this power, too?" I asked excitedly, waiting impatiently for an answer.
"Yes, yes, and… wait, what was that last one again? Oh yeah! Yes. Speaking of Hogan, where is he?" All of a sudden, Hogan jumped up from behind a bush.
"Boo!" he yelled, and laughed. No one was scared. That is weird the thing about Hogan. He likes things that most people don't. For example, scaring people and not expecting them to be scared. Still, he is a great guy.
"Hogan, did you always know Tegon had super powers?" I asked.
"Super powers? OH! That is not super powers! That just the unique powers of when you are a very skilled martial artist. Tegon just calls it super powers. Silly Tegon! Well, since you already know, I might as well tell you the story." He said. So begins the story of their adventure.
"'Daddy! Daddy!' a 5-year-old Hogan said. 'Where are you going?'
'I'm going to meet up with my old sensei and friends back from when I was about your age, Hogan.'"
"STOP TELLING THE STORY!" Tegon yelled.
"What?" the annoyed Hogan said.
"Where am I?" he asked sadly.
"You weren't born yet! Any ways, back to the story! Kugo, our father, was going to meet up with his old childhood friends.
'Can I come too?' I, Hogan asked.
'Sure! I bet he would like to meet you! 'He answered happily. Therefore, we rode on the winds-"
"Wait, what?" I asked.
"My dad's a martial artist, too. Better than, us in fact. Where was I? Ah, yes, here we are! When we got there, a man came up to him and threatened to blow up the Earth unless he gave him a large amount of money. They each other for a long time, but in the end, our dad won. The man said, 'In exactly 10 years, I shall fight you again as a stronger man' and he flew away. From that day on, my dad and I trained our very hardest to be as strong as we can. And when Tegon was born, he started fighting, too."
"Do you know who the man is?" I asked.
"No, but he could be anywhere. It's going to officially be 10 years in a week!"
"Holy guacamole!" I said."What are you going to do?"
"Train, I guess," Tegon shrugged. He was taking this lightly. I don't blame him, though; he is only a little kid.
"Do you think you can, I don't know… win?" I asked, hesitating.
"Well of course we can!" answered Tegon. "We'll make you the best martial artist in a week!" I vowed then to help in any way I could so Hogan and Tegon would win. I didn't know it then, but I was about to become a great female martial artist.
One week later…
"Okay! Is everyone ready? Kugo asked at 3 am in the morning.
"Yes dad!" yelled the brothers.
"Yes Mr. Kugo…um… sir…guy," I stuttered.
"You just call me Kugo, Rose." Kugo said. So we stood there and waited. And waited. And waited.
"Um… is he coming?" Tegon whispered. None of us knew how to answer. By the time it was 7 pm, I was thinking the same thing, too. Now it was 11:00pm and I was starting to feel a bit sleepy. Tegon was already fast asleep. "How could 'he not be here yet?" I thought. At that very moment, something terrible happened. Something so terrible that Tegon actually woke up. (When Tegon was in deep sleep, nothing can wake him up.) The city rumbled. The ground around us began to shake. Right next to us was a stick of dynamite. Before we could do anything, the whole city of Kyadi blew up.
"AHHH!" I screamed. Whew! It was just a dream. All of it… right? "Wait a second… where am I?" I wondered aloud.
"Oh, so you're awake now?" Kugo said, stepping into the room.
"Am I in heaven?" I asked him.
"What? No! You are at my house. You were so tired you fell asleep. You're sake now." I thought for a second. Oh, so that part of it was real while the city blowing up as fake! I thanked god sillently that it was just a dream.
"So where are Tegon and Hogan?" I asked happily. Silence entered the room.
"Tegon and Hogan went with 'him.'"
"What?" I could not believe my ears. "They left?"
"Well, not on propose. While you were asleep, something hit me in the head. I was knocked out for who knows how long. 10 minutes, a half hour, who knows! What I do know, though, is that by the time I woke up, they were gone."
"How do you know it was him?" I said.
"First of all, who would be strong enough to knock me out? In addition, who would fly fast enough to get Tegon and Hogan? In addition, who would choose yesterday to attack us? 'Him!' That's who!" he said, counting each "and who" on his fingers. I was surprised by the way he acted. However, it was true, Kugo was the strongest martial artist in the world, and following were his two young but strong sons.
"Then we got to go find him!" I said, snapping out of my daydream.
"Yeah, that's the point I'm trying to make!" he sighed.
I did not know how it felt to be in grave danger (I think most people feel the same way) so I tagged along with him. Over the week, Kugo taught me how to ride with the winds. It is not very difficult, you see. All you have to do is take deep breaths, move your arms in a swimming position, leap up, and believe. And there you go. You're flying. As we were flying with the winds, I spotted something. "What is that, Mr. Kugo?" I asked.
"I told you not to call me Mr. Kugo and that is a...aw, I don't care!" he said. Man, Kugo was in a bad mood I suppose. Well, anyone would be if an evil invincible man who is trying to kill you stole your two sons. Okay, I don't blame him for being in a bad mood, but shouldn't he at least be more willing to look for his sons? Is this the martial artist everyone was talking about? I decided to ask him if he had any idea where his sons were or more importantly, where we were.
"Look I don't know kid; I just want to find my children. Oh, Tegon…" Kugo voice faded out into the distance. Now I understood. Kugo was so angry his arch nemesis had taken away his children (and who knows what he has done to them) that he just disregarded the fact that I'm with him. What turns out to be a regular snow day was just the beginning of our amazing Wonder Quest.
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Oh, so you read the whole thing and didn't leave after reading the first sentence? You are the best! Okay, since you probably want to read the next chapter, I'll tell you something. In every chapter, I will ask a question. Who ever answers the question correctly I will you a thank you in the beginning of the story 2. If you have a story, I will glady read AND review it so you know I read it 3. Let you name a character that is coming up in the story. If you do want to try out for this challenge, write down your answer when you review and we'll see who wins! This chapter's question is: Name one person that will be on dancing with the stars this year. Tell me answer in the review and you just might win! Se ya next chapter!
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